Sixth Sense

he predicted what will happen to her

    12:25 pm, we were sitting on the swing, you were smiling as you picked up a black cat gently cuddling it in your lap. It's fur enchanted you that you were disappointed when it suddenly jumped away so you followed it. Almost running to the street that a speeding car hit you. Blood splashes along the road, my stomach churning and I wanted to throw up.
  I woke up at exactly 12:05 wondering if what I foresee is true, you visited me. We went to the park to the swing... I suddenly remembered my dream. I grabbed your hand and you looked at me confused I pulled you to the overpass and you slipped and fall dying once again.
  12:30 pm, I woke up, sweat covered. I checked the time and rushed to where you are. You greeted me as usual with a smile. The black cat was once again on your lap, it jumps and you follow it. Time moves so fast as I pushed you away so I'll be the one hit by the speeding car. I looked back at you, you were shocked, I smiled and whispered, 'I saved you from dying because of my sixth sense'

Author's Note

i think this is more of a retelling.

Reviews

[The dark story]

well ,i guess you were running with the story line. though i liked the story. and yeah a nice title

[Silent Wolf]

Wow. Just wow. Now I've got to look this up.

[Rhianne Ney]

You should~ This series is great!

[Silent Wolf]

Alright. I will ASAP

[Rhianne Ney]

:D It have a manga and some related videos

[Silent Wolf]

^_^ mk. Is it called sixth sense?

[Writer #00]

Kagerou Daze/Days!!

This story was great, it was much more clear than the song and (to me) more powerful since you could feel the desperation of the boy before his friend died. Nice retelling. : )

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

I loved this short story, the ending was awesome and so was the title.
100/100

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks for the review I got inspiration from Vocaloid this is Miku's song