Love? I beg to differ

Please don't make me feel this

Seems like the wind will change today

A new destination in the month of May

Beginning with the small petals of a beautiful flower

Alas! I hope my resistance won’t falter

 

Please, oh please, don’t ever come this way

My heart will throb and go crazy

I won’t handle my head if it goes hazy

 Don’t let the butterflies flutter in disarray

 

I told myself, I will never fall

Survive your challenge; I’ve been through it all

Yet, what’s with this rebel inside?

It wants me to think again and decide

 

No! I plead, love isn’t something for me

I might not be able to break free

I’ve hated puzzling things to begin with

Please leave me the leisure to breathe.

Author's Note

Another random write! This is something I thought of while I was having lunch on Mcdo.
My first draft was written on a receipt (: Which I wasn't able to finish. Any suggestions are fine. This is still in free verse despite the rhyme so I'm so sorry about that. Anyways, read at your own leisure

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Reviews

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Aho, so that's what took you so long o.e

But that aside you seem to have grown a lot. Well at least its apparent in this poem. Needless to say it was an enjoyable read though I have to comment that the font size is a tad bit large... or not

Ehem... ano iyan ha? Kaw talaga :3

[Rhianne Ney]

Hahah, wala lang eto iyong sinulat ko sa blue notebook yung tinanong mo last time (:

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

oho~ I see... I was waiting forever alone in the LA room T^T

[Rhianne Ney]

Haha, sorry ha (:P

[emmajoy]

First love is rather like the last - never quite forgotten.. if at all. Your words really touch heart and thought.. the invitation sent before you have ttime to think about it, its arrival but do you want it, yes, nbut, no.. but.. .. .. who knows what's happened since this was rist posted!?

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

WOW! What a beautiful write. :)

Kaze~

[Dreamer]

excellent writing...bravo (:

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks for reading~

[Dreamer]

you're more than welcome!

[Rhianne Ney]

:D nice one,

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

[Rhianne Ney]

Thank you for reading~

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Drifter]

The fear of falling in love is very real. Sometimes it helps to protect ourselves, but sometimes it keeps us from great opportunities. Great write, I can relate to it. I liked the last 2 stanzas best and the song attached at the bottom

[Rhianne Ney]

Wow. Hello there, haven't seen you after a long time. Thanks for taking the time of reading this

[Drifter]

I know, it's been quite awhile since I've logged on. And you're welcome. I always enjoy your writing.

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks that's nice to hear

[Silent Wolf]

Great. I loved it. ^_^ It's really good.

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks buddy

[Silent Wolf]

Welcome. ^_^

[Chris]

Finding time is always hard let alone to rethink through something you likely don't really remember doing anymore...

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks for the review (: It's nice of you to drop by

[Akashi]

I like it a lot. Nice write.

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks.

[Akashi]

You're welcome.

[Rhianne Ney]

: D

[anxia]

The last line is breath taking!

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks

[Sam]

Good Job! Your details make a flow to your piece of writing! :)

[Rhianne Ney]

Woa, thanks for the review (: