Tell him you love him�.

A Poem by Rhine Wolf

this for any one who feels that they are slipping away from the one they love, yes is may seem one sided, but then some times that is all that is needed to break the silence.

Take your man by the hand

And pull him towards you

Place your hands on his face

And Tell him “I love you!’

Take your man by the hand

And lead him to your sanctuary

Gaze lovingly into his eyes

And let him See, that you love him

Take your man by the hand

And guide him to onto the place of slumber

Gently place your hands on him and feel him relax

And then Show him that you love him.

Take your man by the heart

Allow all your love to flow into him

Fill him with your essence, your spirit, you

And Make him fall in love with you till time ends.

© 2008 Rhine Wolf

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TP LaRose

I love it, love it, absolutely love it. If only all people had the capacity to show love like that and also accept love like that. Too many people have walls surrounding them (myself included) that prevent us from truly feeling.
You have an extra 'you' in the 2nd to last line though..(or you're missing a word???) :)
I thought this was just wonderful....thank you for sharing.
Poetess(TP)

Posted 17 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Dragon Witch

This is beautiful love and so true.
Sometimes one just has to try or look a little further... not much
To see what they have....
Love you always.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Emily Rose

A very good reminder, and a great concept for a poem - you're right that more people need to communicate their emotions through their actions and through their words and this poem is a good testament to that. The random capitalization of verbs strikes me as a little odd, however.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kryptonite911

What a beautiful sentiment, unfortunately my man does not allow such beautiful things like this to happen, he is too up tight, but i did once have a night of mind blowing, body thrilling, pure ecstacy. Just wish i did not have to fall asleep.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TP LaRose

Posted 17 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

poetforlife

What lovely sentiment. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 17 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Rhine Wolf

Johannesburg, Heathen, South Africa

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Hi, my name is Fallon. I am a husband, a father, a brother to many, an uncle to a few and a son. I love to write poems and a story here and there. So check them out and please do give me feed back a.. more..