My White Crayon

Incredibly cheesy, but I love it.

My White Crayon

They say it's useless,

The White Crayon.

But they do not know.

It brightens everything,

From Pink to Gold.

The darkest of darks

Becomes a light Gray,

Under it's touch.

 

You are My White Crayon.

Brightening everything in my life. 

You are My White Crayon.

Taking the darkness away.

You are My White Crayon.

Beautiful, stunning, perfect.

Reviews

[Geralyn Miller]

On the surface, this seems sweet and childlike; yet it is more, much more---wise and wonderful, anyone would be complimented to be written about in such fashion.

[Short.Nerd]

This is such a great poem!!! So creative and one of a kind. Good Job (:

[Abigail T]

Awh! This has to be a sweetest, cutest poem I've read all day! Or all weekend. The white crayon never gets what it deserves. :( Lovely!

[Marie Harrison]

Very creative and sexy write!

[melissa]

that is chessy but i like chessy:) great work!!!!!!!

[Ph.D in Victory]

Sweet!

[Morning Star]

I truly love your metaphor in this stunning poem
To me the white crayon could be the metaphor for your soul mate
She is like a white crayon
brightens up your life!
I think this piece is brilliant!!
Enjoy reading ad will be back!
Wishing you Peace Love and light...Yolie

[Tony]

This is a cool poem.

[Snapdragon]

This is a great idea. One of those ideas that I wish I'd thought of. Great Job!

[J.Black]

It's perfect. It brings out the innocence with kiddie crayons.