Fate

    Is there such a thing called fate or does it exist.  Do you really want to believe that you are not in control of where you want to be?  Is that something that you can live with?
    I need to be in control of my own life because with out that control than there is no true reason to live life as it is "planned out to be is no fun."  If there is no control, no way that you can do what you wish, than there is no fun in life.  I need to have the freedom that every single person in the world needs.
    Yet with that freedom you must be convinced that there is no such thing as freedom so tell me yourself is fate a thing of existence, or is it a thing of everyone's imagination?

Author's Note

This was made better with the help of Shep2.

Reviews

[StoryTailor]

Your little excerpt was lovely-- there were a few typos that should be easy to take care of, for example "without" (line 3) is one word. And then just some regular everyday grammar tidbits.


Anyways--
I love the little trail of thought here. I've questions, thought about, supported, believed, disproved, disproved of fate at different times. Although I've never actually written it down (Unless you count a teeny little poem-- I don't.)

^^
It's a great write! A great job indeed.

[dreaming dame]

:) Cool. I never really have thought about fate seriosly. I truly don't know. I believe God is in control, so I'm not ecxactly sure where that puts fate.
Nice write.:)

[Shep]

I write about fate all the time and live through most things that fate has done to me, bad or good I am the same person regardless. Fate is and will only control what you wish to control. Again I will email my findings.