Come here! (slightly hot)

Free Verse

         

Come here!

Let's wrap-up in one another ... 
share enough time 
to watch tree bark grow. 

Grab a piece of sky, 
compare it to my eyes;
I'll caress your face,
imagining the velvet touch
of a sigh's softness, 

or ... 

what your quiv'ring thighs 
feel like 
embracing rippled ache
of rigid ardour. 

Grass traces the wind, 
your eyes my soul, 
and every vein 
in every leaf 
the designs 
our blood 
follows 
to every place, 
calling to be filled ~ 
fulfilled. 

Deep, soft, sensual;
the pools 
of your eyes. 

Into them I dive, 
becoming 
lost inside You ... 

Come here! 

Oh, take me there, 
show me 
what eyes can never see, 
only that which 
lovers know ... 
feel ... 
taste ~ 
with, without the tongue. 

No book yet ever written 
tells us how to love, 
(not that they do not try); 
tells us how it feels to make-love, 
moving friction … 
sensations 
of it all;
yet, they try 
that, too. 

Come here! 

I'm ready, 
if you are ... 

Let's You and I 
find out 
and write 
our own book ~ 


Richard W. Jenkins 
          ©2015

Reviews

[Susan 🦋]

Interesting...you took sky/eyes..ALMOST ryhme in your little free verse and repeated the word TRY. Hmmm. Drive, try, I and inside...repetition of the long (i) sound..got it. plenty of nice little breaks, has the reader pondering thoughts..emphasis on come here! To the question in a sense..If you are....is she? hmm presentation is lovely..smooth flowing, winding down..to hopeful anticipation.

[Richard🖌]

Nice observation of my intertwining technique, Susan, one that keeps the rhymes quiet, yet, allows a semblance of them to slightly tease the senses, eh?
Nothing's amiss with your more feminine intuitions, either. ; )

Warmest hugs! ⁓ Richard ✨

[~]

Ah, yes your pen has more than just 'a few notions' when it comes to setting limbs aflame. :D
There is a lot of passion within this seemingly simple invitation.
I enjoyed the playfulness of it, as well as the combination of the imagery between life in nature and life in us. The free verse fits perfectly the mood and the tone of the verses.
A book of passionate love, written for intimate eyes only.

[Richard🖌]

How warmly your knowing, feeling, sweet words reward and fulfill me, M'Lady, and how delightful it is for my humble little efforts to be appreciated and understood by a beautiful poetess I both admire and respect.

Thank you, Dear moonskittles … big hugs to you! ~Richard

[Kelly Scheppers]

"Grass traces the wind,
your eyes my soul,
and every vein
in every leaf
the designs
our blood
follows
to every place
calling to be filled ~
fulfilled."

...a true bard after my own heart! Your words could stir the calmest sea into a tsunami of pleasure...just beautiful!

[Richard🖌]

You're a bit stirring yourself, Kelly*
No one says such things to me … not that I pay attention to, anyway.

Thank you sooo warmly! ~ Richard

[...]

YUM! This was so sensually classy, intimate and loving...all of that in one beautiful package, dear poet. Loved it :)

[Richard🖌]

Grief!
I love your review, too, Lynn … so warmly descriptive and welcome.

Big hug of thanks to you! ~ Richard