~ the essence that is Us … (heart whispers)

Free Style (Warning: Long, simple wording, and a bit sappy.)

~ the essence that is Us …

-----------~**~---------------------------------------------------

I love You

more with every breath I take,

feel your pulsing

with each heartbeat

of my own …

no greater love

was ever known,

nor sweeter seeds of love

yet sown.

Ask not

how it is possible,

but …

give grateful thanks

for knowing what

is meant to be

… at last

came true for You and Me.

In the moment ...

God touched us one to one ~**~

mind to mind - heart to heart,

soul to soul - body to body,

We knew,

and our universe spun

to our own tune.

The stars

all came aligned,

as soft winds began to gently blow

across the sea,

o’er mountain crests,

through verdant grass and dancing trees,

carrier of ~

our warm embraces, sweet sensual dreams,

oh, such ardent, sating screams,

touched to fire, freed desire

like nothing else before.

Inside that breeze

on bended knees

we embraced;

ever since

a world came into view …

within our own.

We could not

let go as …

a joy like ne’er known

took hold.

Like children

in first love

we embraced;

yet, could not get our fill …

the kind

meant for new lovers

swam our veins,

engulfed me

into your heat,

our throbbing beat

soared o’er me and through

every fiber filled with You,

on unto this day.

Hungered and dreamt,

where

there exist no bounds

we cannot,

will not explore,

nor words we will not say …

We’ve said them all;

yet, ever more remain

that strive and yearn …

aye, ache in equal burn

~ the essence that is Us …

-----------~**~---------------------------------------------------

            Richard W. Jenkins

                © 4 Oct 2012

Author's Note

One pulled from the Archives:
Yeah, I know, it's older and sappy, simple and basically worded … probably, too long, but thought some of you romantics might enjoy a look at it.

Honest, open, well-meant critique is preferred. : )

Reviews

[Silmara McGarry]

You say is simple....the simplicity is what got me reading until the end without even feeling how long...actually, I looked for the next line. Yet, it is not so simple ;-) The naturally spoken words from the heart in the most beautiful language of love, tender, sweet and romantic, touch me.
"Likes children
in first love
we embraced;
yet, could not get our fill …"
Most wonderful dear Richard. I felt like in the 1800s....and I cant explain why. :-)

[Richard🖌]

Ah, Dear Sil,
How very sweet and endearing your lovely words touch and gratify a bard's wishes to write for other's enjoyment and pleasure … I'm left all a'blush. ; )
Of all, I thought You might well appreciate and be touched by the gently warming romance and emotion of this lengthy, simple piece … and, how wonderfully rewarding it is to know how right I was.
The verse you highlighted is one of my favorites, too … surprise-surprise!
"1800s", eh? I've had others mention how antiquated and olde-fashioned my poetry is, and since you think so, I guess it's true.

A beautiful review, Sil … I am so very happy you read this one and found such sweet favor in it … hugs to You! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Great Aunt Astri]

No greater love than you lay down your words. And what powerful, delightful words they are too. And wanting more at the end. I enjoyed this poem.

[Richard🖌]

Ah. M'Lovely Astri ✨

Thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully for blessing this little romantic piece with your sweet touch.
Hugs 'n smiles! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Judy Emery/ Lilly Emery]

This poem is so breath taken, each word was like breath of fresh air, the whispers of love to each others soul, where true emotions grow. Your poem is very talented . I loved each and every word. Thank you for sharing your beautiful gift.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Judy,

I am truly grateful for your every word in praise and appreciation of this tender poem! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[lightsong]

never long when the heart whispers freely, nor ever sappy when true emotions take the lead of the words, of each breath and heartbeat, each dream and desire. again such sincerity through Your words, the gorgeous ethereal expressions, leave us with a certain sad warmth. the yearning that is trying to escape the page, find a way... ways... to be expressed, to fly and soar... that gentleness that hurts us inside, speaking to our inner a language only the hearts can read.

[Richard🖌]

Sincerely, Light,

Your words shared of insight and deep feeling have touched me as meaningfully as mine must have you, to write them.

With much warmth and many blessings! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[heavenscentgirl1]

The ones from your archives are my favories. ❤️❤️❤️ - keep sharing them my dear man.

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Mary Jo,
I'm so glad to share something you favor … I'll dig them out as i run across those I think will be enjoyed.

Many thanks, dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard : )

[sette]

this is really a romantic write the sweet and endearing words used make me look back at the happy times

[Richard🖌]

How beautiful of you, Sette,

To read and review this very long poem to love and tender feelings of romantic imagery.

Warmest hugs to You! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Wow- amazing- so natural so easy so real- what the heart feels it feels-freedom if true love what it cannot feel- making so much sense- just wonderful- a cascading waterfall, a free flowing river- soft smooth sensual and ever so sweet🌹

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Dear Lady Kelly,
Ever-so kindly and warmly for your beautifully embracing words of enjoyment and praise.
If anyone would understand appreciate this piece, I knew it would be You.

Warmest, most grateful hugs to You! ⁓ Richard : )

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh u are a loving kind soul- your words are always so beautiful and sweet smooth and true running out and overflowing from the heart- you are most welcome and hugs returned with gratefulness for your loving heart🌹

[¿]

Again something exceptional!
I so love the second stanza....actually it's a...truly true!
Also I did smell some deep feelings and confessions penned in it....
Hope you're doing well friend :)
Thanks for sharing :)

[Richard🖌]

Ah, Sweet Tahsin🍁
I am so very happy to find you here enjoying one of my humble little efforts.
Your compliments are like a soothing balm to warmly inspire the heart and blend honey with my ink.
I, too, am partial to the second stanza … go figure! ; ) It is the heartbeat of this poem.

Thank you, M'Beautiful Little Poetess! ⁓ Richard

[¿]

Ya know I need this in my library, that heartbeat actually :)
You're lovely comment made my
day! You're heartedly welcome and Almighty's grace be upon you :)