Ultimate Poetess⁓✨ (a salute to all our wonderful Lady-Poets)

Quatrains in Iambic Hexameter, with an aabb, ccdd, etc; Rhyme Scheme.

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 U l t i m a t e Po e t e s s^✨

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Her ink vibrates in universal amplitude,

with such sure vibrant force pure ecstasies exude …

releasing with each graceful sweep of every stroke,

her words resound upon the page, as tho’ they'd spoke.

-~✶~-

Her flowing mane, as ebon as the Stygian night,

or golden as soft-textured braids, corn-silken bright.

I’ve seen her auburn waves, as hot as Hades’ fire;

or, lustrous brunette strands, that spark ardent desire.

-~✶~-

Oh, passion’s touch, awake unto life’s fervent dreams,

that evermore, desires and wantings merge as streams.

From every heartsong pours her sweet elixir’s voice,

eternal rapture ~ captured … aye, you'll have no choice.

-~✶~-

The shape she takes, it may be lithe or slightly slim …

might be, she’s strong or stout; perhaps, or fairly prim.

She’s every woman who has bravely shared her heart,

learned how to charm us with her wonders from the start.

-~✶~-

Each smitten bard in every land and realm worldwide,

has surely yearned to have her writing by his side …

impressive with her graceful wisdom’s keen surprise,

indulge him with the magic in her spark’ling eyes.

-~✶~-

If Free Verse, Sonnet, Villanelle, or lovely Prose,

it matters not what kind of poem she bestows;

for, when she blends her heart and soul into her ink,

it's hers you'll be ~ when she signs with a knowing wink*

༺-~✶~-༻

Richard W. Jenkins

©2019

Author's Note

Artwork, from Wikimedia Illustrations.

Please, feel free to offer whatever advice or comments you think will help! : )

Reviews

[Audrey M.]

This poem is so lovely it plays like a melody.
So tender and silky, it speaks to me.
How many hearts have you stolen or left throats swollen?
My dear man you are a rare gift with song,
Please don't keep me not waiting long
For another chance to hear your voice
Please understand I have no choice.
I'd love to dance to your tune
In the hour of midnights first June.
(Ok hardly is it advice to give or comment made. But I had to answer in this way, for to read your words is to dance in celebration to a man who celebrates women. Thank you for sharing

[Richard🖌]

With a broad "Thank you" heart smile, Dear Audrey 🌸

Sighhh! Such a compellingly stirring review you've gifted this doting poem and its graciously pleased author.
You certainly know how to catch a bard's attention, charming him with a delightfully sweet, warmly imaginative verse of your own.
Seems you celebrate men every bit as enjoyably as I do women.

For answering in the way you have, please, accept my warmest hug of thanks to thee, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Nelyn Salvaleon]

This is so nice! Really love this💕💖 Thank you for publishing this one!

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Lady Nelyn 🌸

To honor You and your excellently rendered poetic efforts, and to receive such wonderfully expressed words of praise, love, and gratitude, as yours, are the hope-filled reasons I write a poem like this for every amazing poetess to receive and express their thoughts and feelings, thereof.

Warmest blessings to You, Dear Poetess, for sharing yours with Me! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[SleeplessVolcano]

Such a delight, this one! I need to read it again.....and again :)

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, SV, ever-so gratefully,

To receive such gracious accolades from an accomplished fellow-poet, gifts an olde bard inspiration, indeed.

Bless you all your days, as you've surely blessed mine! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[.]

What a lovely tribute to all the women writer, here! You made her graceful, precious... Nothing more a poetess can ask for!
Perhapse, you are write... She blends her heart and soul with her writing and a praise worthy generous heart can recognize that thing in her.... I am so humbled by this tribute to all the lovely ladies here...
Hi,
. Nice to meet you and read you in this forum... Have a wonderful day

[Richard🖌]

Hello, Lovely Dreamer 😌

This poem is about You, in homage to your wonderful poetry that blesses us from your creatively imaginative mind, heart, and soul.
I, too, and overjoyed to meet You, and will soon be by your place to partake something from your own portfolio.

Thank you for your gorgeously warm and appreciative review, Dear Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[.]

I really want to thank you for this response of yours, and I was so mesmerised by this poem that even didn't notice the error( #right, instead of write) . Thank you again for this lovely tribute🌷

[Richard🖌]

I just considered it another touch of your charm. ; )

[Vectra Mendonie]

I really like this. The rhyming was nicely done and the image it was paired with is very pretty. The only thing I would notice that it was a bit hard to read because of the font and coloring, but that could just be me. Overall, really well done in my opinion (though that's not worth much.) Good job!

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Dear Poetess Vectra 🥀

Your wonderful words of appreciation and praise truly are as gold to a hopeful bard's ear.
I regret the font reading "a bit hard" on your screen … it's the first anyone's commented as such. Here's the poem in plain block letters, for your ease of enjoyment, and because it's about You (tho, I couldn't center it for you). ; )

༺-~✶~-༻
U l t i m a t e Po e t e s s✨
༺-~✶~-༻
Her ink vibrates in universal amplitude,
with such sure vibrant force pure ecstasies exude …
releasing with each graceful sweep of every stroke,
her words resound upon the page, as tho’ they'd spoke.
-~✶~-
Her flowing mane, as ebon as the Stygian night,
or golden as soft-textured braids, corn-silken bright.
I’ve seen her auburn waves, as hot as Hades’ fire;
or, lustrous brunette strands, that spark ardent desire.
-~✶~-
Oh, passion’s touch, awake unto life’s fervent dreams,
that evermore, desires and wantings merge as streams.
From every heartsong pours her sweet elixir’s voice,
eternal rapture ~ captured … aye, you'll have no choice.
-~✶~-
The shape she takes, it may be lithe or slightly slim …
might be, she’s strong or stout; perhaps, just prim.
She’s every woman who has bravely shared her heart,
learned how to charm us with her wonders from the start.
-~✶~-
Each smitten bard in every land and realm worldwide,
has surely yearned to have her writing by his side …
impressive with her graceful wisdom’s keen surprise,
indulge him with the magic in her spark’ling eyes,
-~✶~-
If Free Verse, Sonnet, Villanelle, or lovely Prose,
it matters not what kind of poem she bestows;
for, when she blends her heart and soul into her ink,
it's hers you'll be ~ when she signs with a knowing wink*
༺-~✶~-༻

Richard W. Jenkins
©2019

Thank you for your most beautiful review, Lady Vectra ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Garrett Leatherman]

The second stanza sounds a lot like Petrarch with the description of the hair! Might he have been an inspiration there?

[Richard🖌]

Who knows, Garrett?

So many artists and worlds of learning have been an influence on my writing over the years, that I no longer know exactly who or what inspired my pen … maybe, you're right in your assertion, but not consciously on my part.

Thanks most gratefully for your read and review! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Haley]

This reminds me of what I first learned poetry to be. Thank you for the beautiful read!

[Richard🖌]

Thank you so very much, Dear Haley 😌

I am graciously blessed you've selected this work in respect and honor to You, a fine, accomplished Poetess and most wonderful lady.
You are quite correct, too … this is true poetry at its classical best, just as there are almost endless forms and types of quality poetry. Many can be read and enjoyed on here that are composed and shared by excellent poetesses, including You.

My warmest hug of gratitude, with a grand 2021 to You, Dear Poetess ⁓ Richard 🍃

[CLR9]

I cannot cram a spoon down my throat enough to get over this poem.

[Richard🖌]

LOL!

Sorry, to get you all choked-up.

[Richard🖌]

OOPS!
I almost forgot to say, "Thanks for the read."

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Hey Sir Richard!
Hope you'd remember me because I do very well. I'm revisiting writerscafe after so long, like after ages... I've been depressed, lacking any desire to write anymore, procrastinating a lot.
Coming to this excellent poem,
I truly felt a connection. It feels like my kinda poetry.
It is a poem praising a poetess, crowning her for her glory.
As you try to carve out all her details, her portrait fills my eyes!
The picture is perfect.
Thank you so much for sharing a poem worth millions in my view.

[Richard🖌]

Ah, Dear Tazeen 🌾

I am sooo very happy to see you … remember you? Never could I forget You and your lovely poems and reviews … you're truly one of a kind Poetess.
I guess you know this poem is about you, too, don't you?
The news of your depression and writer's block saddens my heart, but to see you back reading and reviewing me makes it happy again.

You are ever-so welcome, Tazeen … welcome home, M'Dear, and thank you warmly for your sweet review! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[I'll come see you soon] : )

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I'm feeling extremely elated getting back a reply from you ::)) These little things make my day!
read moreI'm feeling extremely elated getting back a reply from you ::)) These little things make my day!
I'm currently pursuing a bachelors in legislative law...and will ever write poems for it is a gift not everyone is blessed with.
I really look forward to meet you if possible it may be. You're welcome to INDIA!