BALLADE: For those who've been asking for something new. 😏
"BAD BOY!"
Tell me, Sweet One, if you've the nerve, how is it that you love to play? Is it warm with a touch of verve, that softly steals the breath away, and makes all tight resistance sway? Whatever you say, we can do. Come on now, you can have your way; for, I'm a bad boy ... it is true!
Don't worry if your values swerve, not all is black 'n white ~ there's gray; and, with our colors that best serve... we'll look no further than today. There are no rules left to obey; for now, there's only me and you. So, let's lie down and come what may; for, I'm a bad boy ... it is true!
Your breasts are rising, I observe ... the sparkle in your eyes betray your yearning 'neath each writhing curve. Oh, heavens knows we can't delay! The essence of your sweet bouquet excites me, Dearest, through and through. You're wet and warm, a lush buffet; for, I'm a bad boy ... it is true!
You say, "Don't go," that I must, “stay!” Yes, I'll remain, don’t misconstrue... yet, too long, would be your dismay; for, I'm a bad boy ... it is true!
BALLADE
A French format with 3 seven or eight-line stanzas, and a four line envoi
that repeats the last four rhymes of the previous stanza. Syllable Count is 8.
It uses no more than three rhymes with an identical “C” refrain ending each verse.
The rhyme scheme is a-b-a-b-b-c-b-C, a-b-a-b-b-c-b-C, a-b-a-b-b-c-b-C, b-c-b-C.
Constructive critique is always welcome … thank you for reading.😌
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This is a Bad Boy one night stand with luscious words to bring him to her in colorful way; even though t may be gray; Your descriptions of him and his lady friend are vividly clear; there seems to be a rush to passion which is what it's all about. Nicely done
Best, B
I'll bet you thought I forgot about you … not a chance. ; ) read moreHi, Lady Betty 🍂
I'll bet you thought I forgot about you … not a chance. ; )
There's no doubt you've delved into the core of this rather risqué homage to steamy sensuality and male bravado, getting it spot-on correct.
It's so wonderful sharing with someone what "gets" it!
Thank you ever-so warmly for your lovely compliment, too … hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃
3 Years Ago
I knew you didn’t forget me, how could you?😊
3 Years Ago
Betty dear,
That's a question I surely cannot answer. ; )
Well Richard, there you go again! Stopping me in my tracks with yet another beautifully composed sensual write! Wonderful Ballade...and your perfect ending refrains! I'm not sure any woman can resist such a bad boy! Such pure desires play out in this wonderful write and wrap the reader up warmly. This bad boy is such a good boy lol ;-) tsk tsk on that bad boy for even thinking about leaving and causing any dismay! I really enjoyed this read today Richard. A lovely distraction on a cold and rainy day.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
Well, Susan Dear 🌺
I can see your points; especially, on a cold, rainy day. ; )read moreWell, Susan Dear 🌺
I can see your points; especially, on a cold, rainy day. ; )
I don't mind stopping you, if you don't mind being stopped for a peek into such a nicely warming moment shared.
Thank you ever-so sincerely for your lovely compliment, and for enjoying your delightful stop along the way.
Very nice erotica, much to be preferred to the crudeness of porn. It would be interesting to hear it set to music.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
Thank you, John 🤜✫🤛
For looking-in on this rather warm little number.
.. read moreThank you, John 🤜✫🤛
For looking-in on this rather warm little number.
I'd not thought of it as a song, but now that you mention it, there is a nice rhythmic lilt and flow streaming throughout.
Look at that picture … you think this is Me talking? On my .. read moreHah-Haaa, Mary Jo! 😜
Look at that picture … you think this is Me talking? On my best day I never looked that good. But, I'll pretend I do, just for You.😏
You're most welcome, and thanks for dropping by with a smile … I needed that!
Big hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃
4 Years Ago
WHO DO YOU THINK YOUR ARE KIDDING ~ WE ALL KNOW HOW HANDSOME AND KOOL YOU’VE ALWAYS BEEN. HUGS.. read moreWHO DO YOU THINK YOUR ARE KIDDING ~ WE ALL KNOW HOW HANDSOME AND KOOL YOU’VE ALWAYS BEEN. HUGS AND BLESSINGS RICHARD. MJ 🤗🙏😇🌈🎃💀
I'm taking the plunge and going to use my lunch break to write one of these.
You always make these look so easy, but we know that is not the case.
Your poetry is flawless and moving who could ask for more.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
Ohhh-BOY, Cherrie! 😃
You know jussst what to say to make a grateful bard's heart s.. read moreOhhh-BOY, Cherrie! 😃
You know jussst what to say to make a grateful bard's heart smile and dance.
I can't wait to read your rendition of the Ballade … I know you'll do a excellent and creative job (in your own special style) with this challenging format.
And, thank you, Dear Lady-Poet, for the much appreciated, blush-worthy accolades.
Warmest hugs to Thee! ⁓ Richard 🍃
4 Years Ago
PS I may need more than one lunch break to write this one. Shooting from the hip will not work.