Wow! You are a wizard with words, Richard! This very sensual write walked all over my heart as I read. The visual detail is stunning and displays unfathomable deep desire for someone so special.
A poem of love which steals the reader's heart away and leaves them longing for more. Eternal love encapsulated in each word of this magical write. I love how the final five stanzas of the poem begin with "I want" as the poet depicts through excellent word choice, his wants and needs. Superb choice of graphic also, it complements the poem to perfection Wonderful write, Richard. Thank you for sharing...
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Why thank you, Dear Marie 🥂
Your warm breath sends a sweet bouquet wafting through.. read moreWhy thank you, Dear Marie 🥂
Your warm breath sends a sweet bouquet wafting through the air, a sibilant sharing ever-so softly shared.
To have touched your heart in such lushly tender ways, leaving you longing for more is, indeed, an unexpected caress a hopeful bard could not have expected, but he's relishing every word. ; )
That you "love" anything about my poetry inspires a grateful pen to dance and sing.
You're most welcome, Marie … thanks to You, as-well! ⁓ Richard🖌
WOW, this is so wonderful, such a delightful read.
I love the picture you used as well
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Thank you, Meg🌻
Ever-so gratefully for selecting this rather warming Free Verse to.. read moreThank you, Meg🌻
Ever-so gratefully for selecting this rather warming Free Verse to read and comment on.
That you "love" anything about it puts a smile on an otherwise overcast day. 🌤
Dear Richard: a very sensual poem showing us all the things you desire in this lovely lady..it seems you have been studying her with your” smiling cerulean eyes”….some quite erotic language makes me believe you really crave for this fine woman…..”I want these feet to wander….into the deepest part of you”…..love your work
Warmly, B
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And, Betty Dear 🥂
I love your wonderfully effulgent reviews … each with its own .. read moreAnd, Betty Dear 🥂
I love your wonderfully effulgent reviews … each with its own special touches of insight, understanding, graciously laid appreciation, and sweetly encouragingly personal sentiments … sighhh*
Bless You warmly for blessing Me, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard🖌
1 Year Ago
Dear Richard
I am honored with your compliment…. love your words!
And you’re very .. read moreDear Richard
I am honored with your compliment…. love your words!
And you’re very welcome, a pleasure!
Warmly, B
I want my blood, this rich tenderness,
to be your warm blanket of never-ending love.
While there are so many exquisite lines in this poems the ones above stood out to me.
Wanting to cover the person and be their warm blanket in the night!! Sensual yet comforting as well.
This poems speak of a deep passionate love that longs to be eternal and to help undo the past past memories that have tainted or damaged a persons trust in love and relationships. To be the beginning and the end of love; always together until the last days and longer.
Beautifully spake, Dear PB,
How wonderfully caressing the sensatio.. read moreMMmmm! 🍷
Beautifully spake, Dear PB,
How wonderfully caressing the sensations of being deeply assured the core aspects of that which my mind, heart, and emotions spilled upon the page have been so vividly grasped in the insightful manner you've expressed to have.
I simply love the lines you've highlighted, so sweetly blest by your vibrant sentiments, thereof. ; )
Warmest smiles give thanks ever-so gratefully, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard🖌
1 Year Ago
You are welcome. It is a smooth and soft poem of love and all one wishes it to be. That warm and exc.. read moreYou are welcome. It is a smooth and soft poem of love and all one wishes it to be. That warm and exciting feeling deep inside.