I ain't

I learned a kind of love.

Anytime is no time

No time with you

Gentle touching

Expedites the clock's hands

Love so long but forever's a tick

I wish i knew before this

Five years 

Lonely wandering living without a care

Lonely wandering living and now we're here

Frustrated picking the sticker off of your beer

I'm impatient when the f**k are your friends (bye guys) yeah

I knew it 

you knew It 

who knew It 

now we're here

Door clicks

I'm salivating like I had Pavlov's dog's ears

Come here

lips softer than satin silk and cashmere

Not here (why)

Because your dad will kick my a*s

and your mom's upstairs

That's fair but I got to try

Jeans getting tighter 

window getting smaller 

I got an idea

I got a place twenty minutes away 

95 down 95

My minds on 96

Anticipation thick as we ride

occasional swerves to keep you live

I hope this fairs well 

and she'll do me In the stairwell

We walked right passed the stairwell

It's been five years what's five minutes more

I thought maybe she'd get me

In the kitchen 

on the couch

on the floor

no dice 

In bed

hit the lights

increasing speed 

she didn't feel It

rolled right 

I felt left 

hands felt

I'm unbuckling my belt

but wait

she has reservations

This ain't a date

She has reservations but I don't know If I can wait

Hand caressing up her thigh

she's talking like she's high

but what about what we come for

You miss your sis In Brazil

Well let me comfort

I climbed on top to get It...

her eyes closed

she breathes slow 

I felt special 

just to witness that

I think I love her

Five years Is a long time

for love not reciprocated

Thinking physical interactions could contain

I found love Is In the restraint

I thought i knew love

but I ain't

Reviews

[Charlotta Yvonne Smith]

This was an very interesting piece. And the reason why I say that is because of the curiousity I gained by just reading over your words. I have heard so many things about what's occured and also..love but I have never even gotten close to that kind of moment. Never experienced it yet I loved reading it. Keep writing! But..please capitalize the lowercase "I's" :)

[richy]

hahah I am going to go back and edit every lower case "i". I swear!

[Charlotta Yvonne Smith]

Okay. But seriously, I enjoyed it.

[B J Hughes]

How well you've captured not only the frenetic anticipation, the rush of anxiousness of a sexual encounter, but the realization of the emptiness found when said encounter is met without a deep emotional bond. Remind me of my younger days playing music, making a quick-and-easy pickup for the night only to be met by the same loneliness in the morning that I had the night before.
The pacing and presentation were excellent while the actual construction of lines added to the heated rush to consummate this long awaited trophy f**k. Giving you 100/100 because I can't give you 200/100.

[ThePaperPrincess]

Your descriptions are amazing, I love the way your poem is phrased and worded and the flow it has to it. It seems almost fast paced, and urging. Absolutely wonderful

[Ruth]

Love is as much of a deceiver as it is a liberator...this has a tangible energy...well thought out :)

[richy]

wow thank you for reading it!

[Ruth]

My pleasure :)