Into your eyes.

When I look into your eyes.
I never want to hear us say our goodbyes.
sometimes you act like you dont care.
but like an endless dream I'll always be there.
when I look into your eyes.
I see an ending of your cries.
when you need me just let me know what it is when & where.
im telling you a love like this is rare.
when I look into your eyes.
I think about how true love never dies.
im with you i wouldnt rather be elsewhere.
im in love with you I swear.
nomore heartbreaks or nights full of nightmares.
im just tryna show yuu forever we gon be a pair.

Reviews

[Dilan Gray]

This is a fantastic poem! I love it so much, it is so sweet and romantic!!!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I found it to read much like a song. A good rhyme scheme.
Love... this is a love poem.
Nice writing, Blake.

Chloe

[Lowesy]

good, i liked it, twas interesting! one thing though, the sentence 'im with you i wouldn't rather be elsewhere.' doesn't really flow right, just seems to make me stutter when i read it, maybe 'when I'm with you, I wanna be right here'.