Making Faces

An uninvited guest comes into a shop at closing time.

Making Faces
Written by Rïén Kelso


Ryan Kelso
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INT. AUTO REPAIR GARAGE - NIGHT

BRAD, the owner at an auto garage, is closing up shop for
the night. He puts away all of the tools and cleaning up
oil leaks on the ground.

All of a sudden, he hears the door's bell ringing, the kind
that rings when people walk into the shop.

BRAD decides to go the shop and see what's going on.

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INT. AUTO REPAIR SHOP - NIGHT

When BRAD walks into the shop, he sees a MAN standing
around. Still. Very still. BRAD tries to kick him out.

BRAD
Excuse me, sir. We're closed.

The MAN still stands there. Emotionless.

BRAD
Sir, we're closed now. If you want
anything, you'll have to come tomorrow.

The MAN continues to stand there.

All of a sudden, a transformation of the MAN occurs. First
the face changes form a few times. One of an animal. a
demon, a zombie, and a monster. It's jaws open wide,
practically unhinging the jaw. You see razor sharp teeth.
The skin starts to melt, sliding right off the bone. His
body starts to contort as it looks bendy and flexible. The
MAN shouts out:

MAN
Help me!

BRAD backs away.

And just as soon as it happened, it stopped. The MAN
returned back to it's human state. BRAD is shocked by these
disturbing images. He backs away from the MAN in fear and
runs back into the garage.

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INT. AUTO REPAIR GARAGE - NIGHT

BRAD hides behind a wall and is shock and awe over what he
had just saw. He grabs a wrench and goes back into the
shop.

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INT. AUTO REPAIR SHOP - NIGHT

BRAD storms into the shop, ready for whatever danger that
MAN poses. But he looks around and doesn't see the man
anymore. He continues to look around.

CUT TO:

BLACK

The screen cuts to black. The MAN's distorted image pops up
and then goes back to black.

CUT TO: END

Reviews

[RienKelsoCinema]

Interesting and eerie concept in this one my friend... well layerd out this screenplay....
Now we are all wondering what kind of persona this man was.... and that being mysterious about it, hungers me for more.... thank you for sharing.

- Elisa

[RienKelsoCinema]

That is something I am trying to work on. Less gags. Thank you for pointing it out.

Know my friend, I love your screenplays. They are beyond good.... :)

[RienKelsoCinema]

Thank you very much, I really appreciate it! I shall try to get more out then! :D

You should! do you know how much you're missed? (by me) when you're offline for so long? ha!

[RienKelsoCinema]

I'm sorry. :P I have been busy at school but I have been writing and I'm here to post some more material up while catching up on other people's work. :)

I know I know... just kidding with you. :) just never rush dear one, take your precious time, don't you know my sarcastic humour yet? he he.. always good to see you though. Relax, time is just golden, as patience is ;)

[RienKelsoCinema]

Don't feel offended, I'm always taking things too seriously, I never register sarcasm. :P

read moreDon't feel offended, I'm always taking things too seriously, I never register sarcasm. :P

Thanks. :)

I know you do ;) that's why I am kidding with you, cos of good heart dearest best film maker ever :D proud of you xx

[RienKelsoCinema]

Thank you very much. It really means a lot. :D

You're so welcome, you're talented, and must know it (even just a little bit in that tiny humble heart of yours) :) smiling

[RienKelsoCinema]

Not even, just trying to express the work. But thanks, I like your writing as well! :D

Ever so humble, ever so precious :)

[RienKelsoCinema]

Thanks! :)

Very welcome always, I do love to read every corner of your mind.