anxious

Journal poem

Sometimes my nerves get so shot
I get headaches a lot
I used to enjoy more
But thats a feeling I haven't got
In a while
What's my style
I forgot
I could have it better
I could have it worse
Sometimes it's better to be bored
Than to be overwhelmed and burst
I just don't know what I'm moving toward
I gotta thirst
To get my happiness
as a reward

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

I can feel this frnd, I can remember those moments of despair and anxiety when I used to stay in my bed all day long so that I could pass those moments of reality... You have quite excellently painted how exactly it feels to be anxious... And to the ending of the poem, I believe we all strive for happiness... Loved it...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Bohrium Guy]

Your imagery is fluent with your words I admit. Well done on this write!

Thanks for sharing this piece.

Hugs,

~Rob~

[The Nude Writer]

Oh I know this kind of anxiety. And you described it so well :)

[harry gharial]

Nice work dear. Stay happy

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This is relatable to all humans. There is times we all feel with any direction at times " I just don't know what I'm moving toward ". You did a wonderful job the emotions of feeling anxious. N.

[T. Edana Talbott]

I could really relate to this, especially the first 5 lines.
Great poem!

[Courtney Hough]

Amazing and so relatable. Anxiety is such a hard thing to deal with and the simplicity of this shows it perfectly.