The Best of Me

The Best of Me

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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What makes me beautiful

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Kathryn was adventurous, loyal and steadfast
From Mary, her sweet nature and features amassed
Kathleen, her hardworking, strong Irish pride
In these women, my own beauty's tied
Be it nature or nurture, witness or bloodline
These women live, their traits I enshrine
The best of me
Is my ancestry

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Just thinking about the women who have shaped me.

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interesting. I like the concept here. we are shaped by our pasts and you have taken that a step further t the people in our pasts, the people who created our pasts. well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

Thanks! I have been blessed to have had wonderful, strong women in my life.
Ryan

12 Years Ago

a wonderful blessing :)
The best of you is hwat you've made of your ancestry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

What a kind comment! Thank you, Marie.

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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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