Locked Out

Locked Out

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
"

There is no key

"

Closed

Locked

Windowless

I will see you

No more

 

Wishing

Praying

Pleading

Cannot

Pick the lock

 

Keeping us

On opposite sides

Of this cold

Heavy

Door

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Missing someone quite a bit today...

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this is painful...and that door can be so thick and impenetrable...nothing could get through it..especially emotions when they have been separated by misunderstanding, or cruel words...

another key needs to be made...and soon...before the damage is irreparable...

wonderfully worded...

jacob

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Jacob.

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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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