Within

A pondering of prepositions

Over and under and through and around

Where are we going, what will be found?

Above, among, out and inside,

Wherever we go, from Life we can't hide.

Author's Note

Just bored, playing with some words...

Reviews

[SteveB]

Wherever you go, there you are.
As always a little gem. Should the adjective now be changed to "Sevical"?

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! I like that! Thanks, Steve :)

[SteveB]

As we have discussed, it is deserved.

[Stella Armour]

no we can't hide anywhere.. circles within circles and we keep going round

[Rita L. Sev]

Yep. Thanks for reading, Stella!

[Frieda P]

Ha your boredom speaks volumes, NO, you can't hide!

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thanks, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

My pleasue :-)

[Shaun Payton]

Whats a preposition? Hehe

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! That's what my students would ask... :)

[Shaun Payton]

:)

[Water_Lilly]

Its quite nice, though not so clear. :-)
i would suppose you connect both verses such that they point to what really u r meaning. . .

[Rita L. Sev]

This was a boredom piece - I was playing around with prepositions. Thanks for reading!

[Debbie_Philly]

Very clever... I really enjoyed this piece !!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you. This was really a result of waiting out the dismissal bell in my classroom... :)

[Marie]

Bo, life always finds us.

[Rita L. Sev]

Amen to that!

[Lina Grey]

prepositions... fun fun fun. interesting poem Rita :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Lina! Really, I was waiting out dismissal after a long day with my students, and was just playing with words a bit. :)

[Lina Grey]

:D