Morning Marvel

It's a beautiful day!

This is the dawn’s grandest marvel,

What morning’s sweet glory should be

Raising up the night’s demise,

Advent of possibility

Author's Note

Enjoying the beauty of this morning

Reviews

[Frieda P]

This must be after coffee right? ha...lovely sentiment here Rita.

[Rita L. Sev]

You know me and mornings, Frieda... ;) Thanks!

[Frieda P]

Is hubby a morning person too?

[Rita L. Sev]

Didn't used to be - a real night owl when we first met. Now, a regular schedule and a regimented Labrador retriever get him up early too :)

[Frieda P]

Ha I'm sure you had something to do with that too... :-)

[Rita L. Sev]

Perhaps... I'm the one who taught the dog to lick his face in the morning... ;)

[Frieda P]

Oh brother, we would so not get along int the morning Lol ;-P

[Rita L. Sev]

Well, I'd be sure to have the coffee ready - and stay out of your way until you've had a cup. :) Lol!

[Frieda P]

Hahahaha, did you talk to my kids or something? ;-)

[Rita L. Sev]

LOL! No, I am just used to being a morning person in a night owl world!

[redflutterby]

Another beautiful sunrise... painted by you! Beautiful poem Rita!!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Red!

[Sami Khalil]

The beauty of the dawn along with your poem...Nice

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Aethereal]

This rhyme says a book full in so few lines: It inspired me to try to write a rhyme with somewhat the same theme which you may have as a gift:

Dawn

A new day is born
with Night's gray demise.
How may Dawn adorn
our new found surprise?

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this adds such dimension to the physical beauty of a sunrise.

it's the sunrise within us. and the hopes for a new day.

[Rita L. Sev]

And in each dawn, all things are possible... Thank you so much, Jacob!

[Angel]

LOL...it's raining here...and I'm not talking little diamond drops, either...in fact, I was thinking of building me an ark.
But it is good to know that the sun is shining somewhere.

On the other hand, where you are, the sun is always shining. You are such a joy, Rita!!
Well done, by the way!

[Rita L. Sev]

We had rain all day yesterday, Angel - and it was a dismal day not only in the weather, so this morning's sunshine is most welcome! Thank you so much - you make me smile!

[Angel]

The weatherman says it's gonna be dismal for the next several days. Blech...
So, keep the happy coming, my friend...your Angel needs to smile!!

[Jack...]

I love the mornings, especially when they are filled with your poetry.

[Rita L. Sev]

And now it's an even better day - thank you for your kindness, Jack!