Daydream Believer

In the tomorrow of my daydreams

they’re closer than they seem

floating ever nearer

on a clear and conscious stream

 

Musing to their own beat

my drummer’s right on cue

each day finds the melody

that fills my soul anew

Reviews

[Skye]

Oh! I love this immensely! The flow is perfect, and it made me smile.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Skye! I'm glad you enjoyed this!

[ShelleyA]

Lovely Rita. Simply lovely. I like the whimsy of this piece about daydreaming. Excellent use of brevity. Lovely depth of feeling. Nice imagery and descriptives. Flow is good as is the line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhythm. Good rhyming. Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on!

[Rita L. Sev]

This one kept me awake one night... ironic, yes? ;) Thanks, Shelley!

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome. I've had poems keep me awake until I write them down. I keep a pen and pad next to my bed just in case, so I can jot down the thoughts and get back to sleep.

[Samuel Jack]

I'd love to have that much positive energy in the morning, and belief in my goals. A lovely little inspirational poem.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Samuel!

[Frieda P]

This screams Rita!! Perfecto!!

[Rita L. Sev]

Why thank you, Frieda!

[Angel]

Oh, I could hide, neath the wings, of the bluebird as she sings...

But what bluebird ever sang as prettily as our own Little Bird, right here in the Café?
I love this sweet write, Rita!!
Thank you for sharing it with me this morning!!

[Rita L. Sev]

:) This was one of those nagging rhymes that would not leave me alone until I wrote it down... I'm glad you liked it! Thanks, Angel!

[Angel]

I always did like the Monkees...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"cheer up sleepy Jean, oh what does it mean?"

this filled me with a melody of renewal...and rebirth.

[Rita L. Sev]

Taking in the positive as much as possible... Thanks, Jacob!

[Jack...]

Perfect Rita, another gem from the our wonderful gem.

"And a...homecoming Queen" Sorry, I just had to.

Loved it my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

I know, that song kept at my ear too... Thanks, Jack!

[Aethereal]

It seem that your daydreams are on the move in this poem as they go forward with the beat of a drum. It inspired me to write this gift couplet for you which you may keep. Its in /0/0/0/ seven syllable meter:

Row

Row, row, row your boat of dreams
gently down your conscious streams.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Aethereal!