Relief

Six word story #3

Loves me? Loves me not.  Whew!

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

I think that's called "dodging a bullet". It's happened to me several times. I roped 'em, but they dragged me till I had to let go.

[Rita L. Sev]

Lol. Yes, dodging the bullet was just what I had in mind...

[rhythm&blues]

I like this one a lot! 'Whew'.....

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thank you, R&B!

[Einstein Noodle]

smiling :)) glad i stopped by!
E.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, E! Tried a few of these for a contest...

[Zahra]

ha cool, a good goodbye... Thanks for sharing

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Voice!

[Marie]

Daisies don't lie. Welcome good bye.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Exactly! :)

[Cassie]

I have felt like this so many times. Ha!

[Rita L. Sev]

Lol! Thanks for reading, Cassie!

[Stella Armour]

what a dilemma...not knowing can be so emotional..

[Rita L. Sev]

And sometimes knowing it's a "no" is a good thing... Thank you, Stella!

[ShelleyA]

Hi Rita. Great use of brevity, and it tells a story that is gripping. Is the person loved? I can see a person plucking petals off a flower saying those words. Well done. Write on!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Shelley!

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome Rita. It's always a pleasure.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it sure can be tiring, the not knowing...worse than finding out one way or the other.

i could have written this many times with my love life.

they always say, reading a story in first person, we identify with the author...and feel we are the character, i find that so true.

[Rita L. Sev]

That is true. And sometimes the "not" is a relief! Thanks for reading, Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are right, sometimes we are better off when there is "not"--

i feel that way especially towards my third ex...'thank you for leaving me!"