Blissful, Me

"I am" Poem

I am blissful, I am me

I wonder what tomorrow holds

I hear the sunrise every dawn

I see the sky as it unfolds

I want all people to be free

I am blissful, I am me

 

I pretend to have no doubts at all

I feel cherubic choir voices

I touch the veil of Heaven’s door

I worry about so many choices

I cry when Death demands his fee

I am blissful, I am me

 

I understand that we must let go

I say we make our own truth

I dream about my father’s laugh

I try to keep the joy of youth

I hope for peace that all may see

I am blissful, I am me

Author's Note

captcha: tingly :)

Reviews

[Zahra]

tingly :) No doubt this is my favourite poem from this contest, a blissful piece. Loved it.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Voice! I truly appreciate that. (tingly made me smile!) :)

[Angel]

Yep...that about describes the Rita we've all come to know and love...around you, my happy friend, bliss is contagious.

[Rita L. Sev]

I certainly hope this is true... :) Thank you, Angel! Hope you are feeling better today!

[Angel]

Still got the tummy crummies...can't eat anything but tomato sandwiches.

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Hope they're as good as the Jerseys... ;)

[SteveB]

A beautiful encapsulation of a charming soul. Can I already say congratulations on winning this challenge?

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Steve - I appreciate that. But you need to read the others - they are wonderful. I am always amazed by the different styles and talents here...

[Marie]

We should all be so blissful as this...and happy within ourselves...

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Marie!

[ANTO]

Tingly is as tingly does Rita - a dream of utopia that I know you would wish for all even if it meant your own demise - thats blissful you.
Thanks for this elevating write
X

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thank you, Anto - I seek bliss in every day - and you know what they say: seek and you will find...

[Constance Payne]

To be able to be blissful in the knowledge of self is one of the greatest gifts of life. I look forward to receiving that gift in my life. I absolutely adore this!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Constance! So glad you enjoyed this!

[Cassie]

And your smile on your profile pic confirms it. Thank you for sharing

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you for that, Cassie! :)

[Renée]

" I am blissful I am me" your joy in life shines and is infectious ! Enjoyed and Well Done Rita ! ( :

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Renee! :)

[Renée]

it was fun getting a glimpse into you..besides your poetry ( :

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Trying to keep the joy of youth, being young at heart is a key to happiness.
Thank you for showing some of your deeper layers.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Dale! :)

[Angi]

Wonderfully done, Rita! I love the flow and rhyme of this. I was smiling throughout. Angi~

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Angi! :)