Into the Fog - A Plaidman and Paisleygirl Adventure

Into the Fog - A Plaidman and Paisleygirl Adventure

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
"

Couldn't help myself...

"

Plaidman and his Paisleygirl

Along with Patchwork Dog

Were called to help a damsel

Lost somewhere in the fog

They searched for her for hours

Amid each low-lying cloud

She heard them as they neared her ~

Their costumes were THAT loud

Now they are a trio,

Social fabric’s on the mend

It’s Plaidman and brave Paisleygirl

With their Polka-dotted friend!

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Blame Doc and Angel for this one... ;)

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Rita, Brill-loved it. It just rolls of the tongue.
Take Care.
Will

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Will - glad you enjoyed this silly adventure!
Great one for the kiddies I think. The artwork would be amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

A series, combined with Angel's and Doc's pieces... :) Thanks, Pryde!
I knew Doc had to have a hand in this! Ha! I love all the mismatchy images. Fun poem, Rita! Angi~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

Thanks, Angi! A silly, fun series of mismatched heroes...
Lydia is absolutely right! This was a charming piece and I found it a delight to read. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

Thanks, Gleb!
No need to blame anyone...this is delightful! I could picture the trio walking down the yellow brick road....but only if there were red bricks thrown in for design! Loved it. Lydi**

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

Thanks, Lydi - you should read the saga that DrWood and Angel have going! :)
Our little "family" is growing....
We're gonna need a bigger cave.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

And more material... LOL!
Cute, cuddly and imaginative ! Doc Wood should be looking over his shoulder I reckon?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dr. Wood ?

12 Years Ago

I love competition......Frankly as I said to Rita when we first 'met' it is GOOD to see someone else.. read more
Tom

12 Years Ago

Sure beats the constant love poem thing that is a regular on here.. I say !
Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

:) Thanks, Tom - yes, those of us who prefer smiling poems to crying ones need to work together to .. read more
Oh this just gets better and better...I feel an addiction setting in.....I also think that this is the best so far...BRAVO

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

Well, I am humbled for sure! These characters are just too cute! Thanks, Doc!

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Added on October 26, 2013
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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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