January

Summer’s mementos

on a golden pedestal

camouflaged in frost 

Reviews

[Sue Hart]

Three lines and it's a story of imagery of winter closing in on the beauty of summer. It's amazing how you do that.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Sue - short poems are a fun challenge. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Winter hiding the blooms of spring....such a lovely image. Lydi**

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Lydi

[Sami Khalil]

I don't camouflage my thoughts that this is a wonderful write. Good start for the New year...Bravo.......................

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome ...:)..................

[redflutterby]

Winter is just camouflage hiding the green of spring and summer. Wonderful poem Rita.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Red

[icelandicblue]

This is lovely Rita. I have to admit ice covered nature is a wonder to behold.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Blue

[Baby Ricochet]

Reads like january to m.....

[Rita L. Sev]

Than you, Mark

[Pryde Foltz]

Very beautiful, Rita. Fantastic picture, too.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Pryde!

[Ahena MK]

so cute... really good...
ahena

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Ahena!

[Frieda P]

Outstanding imagery in so few words Rita. Well said!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Frieda!

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Though winter is powerful and binds the world with frost, there is still hope, nevertheless that summer resides deep within it all, one day to blossom fully into glorious grandeur. Great write!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you for such a thoughtful insight, Gleb!