Endgame

Blessed and burdened by sorrows the same

Though each may bear a different name

The roots are love ~

Or lack thereof

Fear blooms in the endgame

Author's Note

captcha: unsour

Reviews

[Crusaderscross]

Your choice of words is perfect and they convey the picture you have in your head. Good job

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, CC. I appreciate your words.

[Neville]

I must confess
I must learn to
love or like your
writing less

Having almost
drowned in the words
you left
for me to stumble on.... Very nice indeed... N

[Rita L. Sev]

What a lovely review! Thank you for your time and your kind words, Neville!

[Neville]

Pleasure, N

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

The work of a masterful wordsmith... brilliantly composed piece, Rita.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you so much for your kind words, Travis

[Jack...]

Rita, when I visit your world I am certain to think, to smile and to feel. You always bring to us an offering of something that is wonderfully penned as you have today...even if it is a bit down or unsour???? Very nice my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

I think that captcha was trying to tell me to snap out of it... Thank you, Jack!

[Frieda P]

You are so adept at this sort of thing Rita, witty and clever at the same time, you're like the Wizard. Killer last line, always a wise thought from your pen and entertaining thought from your pen!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Frieda. This was the result of a dismal mood the other day - glad you saw some wisdom here!

[Frieda P]

You, dismal? I don't believe you!