Downpour

A Poem by Rita L. Sev

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Tick, tick, tick, tick . . .

tickticktickticktick...

Time is a downpour

of memories

racing

down

the drain

© 2014 Rita L. Sev

Author's Note

Rita L. Sev

Listening to the rain on the sidewalk...

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Funny I read this today Rita. I just finished installing a French drain and I can assure you I want those memories to go down their. Sheesh. Very nice my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Jack... The rain has been nonstop today. Yes, washing away memories of an annoying job so.. read more

The title , the metaphor and the poem are all great...:).................

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Sami.

12 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...................

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Added on January 11, 2014
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Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA

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