Downpour

Downpour

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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Tick, tick, tick, tick . . . 
tickticktickticktick...
Time is a downpour
of memories
racing
down 
the drain

© 2014 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Listening to the rain on the sidewalk...

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Funny I read this today Rita. I just finished installing a French drain and I can assure you I want those memories to go down their. Sheesh. Very nice my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Jack... The rain has been nonstop today. Yes, washing away memories of an annoying job so.. read more
The title , the metaphor and the poem are all great...:).................

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Sami.
Sami Khalil

12 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...................

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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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