Good Game

Good Game

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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Life is a grand game 
Of tic tac toe... 
Strategically placed exes, 
And quite a few ohs...

© 2014 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Random thoughts popping into my sleep-deprived brain...

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Yes ... You coined the right term, strategic . And indeed like game to life we make bad moves and blunders . Its a fun simple game .

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Simple, with complexities we add ourselves... Thanks, AU.
Author Unknown

11 Years Ago

Your welcome . My dear old friend .
Ha ha...like the playful nature of this piece.....good use of words and like the picture.....your sleep deprived brain is very creative still.....:)

BB

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, BB! Lack of sleep takes me down some different paths... LOL!
:) you made me smile. So terse, yet so detailed write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Anand! Glad you liked this short piece!
Absolutely priceless in both the message it conveys, and how it portrays it. Wonderful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Gleb!
hmmm and of a couple of ah's in between lol Humor has priceless value...you dear Rita are wonderful

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Shaun! :)
Shaun Payton

11 Years Ago

You are welcome Rita:)
That is just genius. So funny.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

:) Maybe I should lack sleep more often... Thanks, Pryde!
Lol.... good to place the ex's at a strategic distance! And life would be boring without those oh's!! ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Yes it would! Thanks, red! Love the pic, btw!
redflutterby

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rita...its the first current one ive posted here. No more butterfly of mystery...haha..
Those Ah's and those Oh's sums up a lot of things in relationships and life in general. Maybe I'll add Oops...A wonderful write...:).........................

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! True, Life offers a bit of everything! Thanks, Sami!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome, oh , any time...:)..................
my exes are all over the board, thus the best i can ever hope for is a tie...they seem to know how
to play better than i.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

:) This little rhyme made me smile - Thanks, Jacob!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sorry had to interject, just read this...you're too funny jacob!
Yes, I say "oh" a lot myself...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

In wonder, in frustration, in awe... Oh, what the World has to show us... :)

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