Good Game
A Poem by
Rita L. Sev
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Life is a grand game Of tic tac toe... Strategically placed exes,
And quite a few ohs...
© 2014 Rita L. Sev
Author's Note
Random thoughts popping into my sleep-deprived brain...
Reviews
Yes ... You coined the right term, strategic . And indeed like game to life we make bad moves and blunders . Its a fun simple game .
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Simple, with complexities we add ourselves... Thanks, AU.
11 Years Ago
Your welcome . My dear old friend .
Ha ha...like the playful nature of this piece.....good use of words and like the picture.....your sleep deprived brain is very creative still.....:)
BB
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ha ha...like the playful nature of this piece.....good use of words and like the picture.....your sleep deprived brain is very creative still.....:)
BB
11 Years Ago
Thank you, BB! Lack of sleep takes me down some different paths... LOL!
:) you made me smile. So terse, yet so detailed write :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
:) you made me smile. So terse, yet so detailed write :)
11 Years Ago
Thanks, Anand! Glad you liked this short piece!
Absolutely priceless in both the message it conveys, and how it portrays it. Wonderful!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Absolutely priceless in both the message it conveys, and how it portrays it. Wonderful!
11 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Gleb!
hmmm and of a couple of ah's in between lol Humor has priceless value...you dear Rita are wonderful
Posted 11 Years Ago
hmmm and of a couple of ah's in between lol Humor has priceless value...you dear Rita are wonderful
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Shaun! :)
11 Years Ago
You are welcome Rita:)
That is just genius. So funny.
Posted 11 Years Ago
That is just genius. So funny.
11 Years Ago
:) Maybe I should lack sleep more often... Thanks, Pryde!
Lol.... good to place the ex's at a strategic distance! And life would be boring without those oh's!! ;-)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Lol.... good to place the ex's at a strategic distance! And life would be boring without those oh's!! ;-)
11 Years Ago
Yes it would! Thanks, red! Love the pic, btw!
11 Years Ago
Thanks Rita...its the first current one ive posted here. No more butterfly of mystery...haha..
Those Ah's and those Oh's sums up a lot of things in relationships and life in general. Maybe I'll add Oops...A wonderful write...:).........................
Posted 11 Years Ago
Those Ah's and those Oh's sums up a lot of things in relationships and life in general. Maybe I'll add Oops...A wonderful write...:).........................
11 Years Ago
Ha! True, Life offers a bit of everything! Thanks, Sami!
11 Years Ago
You are welcome, oh , any time...:)..................
my exes are all over the board, thus the best i can ever hope for is a tie...they seem to know how
to play better than i.
Posted 11 Years Ago
my exes are all over the board, thus the best i can ever hope for is a tie...they seem to know how
to play better than i.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
:) This little rhyme made me smile - Thanks, Jacob!
11 Years Ago
Sorry had to interject, just read this...you're too funny jacob!
Yes, I say "oh" a lot myself...
Posted 11 Years Ago
Yes, I say "oh" a lot myself...
11 Years Ago
In wonder, in frustration, in awe... Oh, what the World has to show us... :)
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