Reminder to Control Freaks
A Poem by
Rita L. Sev
Senryu
Control freaks beware
Mother Nature’s wild mood swings
will not bow to you
© 2014 Rita L. Sev
Author's Note
If you're still not convinced, come to the East Coast... as soon as the airports are cleared...
Reviews
That she will not... all bows before her feet! Great write, Rita. But, can I at least complain about the snow a little? Lol
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Ha! Complaints about the snow and cold were what lead to this write, Travis... LOL! Go ahead, compla.. read more Ha! Complaints about the snow and cold were what lead to this write, Travis... LOL! Go ahead, complain - she won't listen anyway!
11 Years Ago
I know... and I hate being ignored (says the control freak)! Haha
She humbles those who are arrogant and reminds those that God gave it power and laws to govern with its domain......Excellent...:)........
Posted 11 Years Ago
She humbles those who are arrogant and reminds those that God gave it power and laws to govern with its domain......Excellent...:)........
11 Years Ago
Amen, beautifully expressed Sami! Thank you!
11 Years Ago
You are welcome...Any time...:)....................
It's so true, I've often wondered why we don't respect the power of nature more than we do. This is succinctly insightful.
Posted 11 Years Ago
It's so true, I've often wondered why we don't respect the power of nature more than we do. This is succinctly insightful.
11 Years Ago
Because we are given the illusion of control in every other area... Thanks, Blue.
11 Years Ago
So true and I know we dream of controlling the weather too.
This can be use for some commercial, enjoyed it
Posted 11 Years Ago
This can be use for some commercial, enjoyed it
11 Years Ago
Thank you, A, glad you enjoyed!
11 Years Ago
You're welcome, you have good taste in Authors:)
Well I am glad im not one of those.My son is young and thinks he can control the world Hence he is shoveling driveways today
Posted 11 Years Ago
Well I am glad im not one of those.My son is young and thinks he can control the world Hence he is shoveling driveways today
11 Years Ago
A good lesson for him to learn... send him my way with that shovel, please! :)
11 Years Ago
He is a good kid and he and i use to shovel the drive of the old woman down the road
Yes that is true . We have a lot of micro manager in our workplace . Who wants to be the chief and not indians . Oh perhaps you have this rare one ... The Jezebel Spirit . ... The work place could turn into dessert full of cactus .
Posted 11 Years Ago
Yes that is true . We have a lot of micro manager in our workplace . Who wants to be the chief and not indians . Oh perhaps you have this rare one ... The Jezebel Spirit . ... The work place could turn into dessert full of cactus .
11 Years Ago
Ha! Thanks, Neil!
Ahaha, this is true. Mother Nature is truly uncontrollable.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ahaha, this is true. Mother Nature is truly uncontrollable.
11 Years Ago
She puts us in our place, for sure... :)
For a second I thought this one was about me but then I saw the Author's notes. LOL. Very clever, Rita.
Posted 11 Years Ago
For a second I thought this one was about me but then I saw the Author's notes. LOL. Very clever, Rita.
11 Years Ago
Lol! ;) Thanks, Pryde!
She does know how to keep us humble… great piece Rita !!
Posted 11 Years Ago
She does know how to keep us humble… great piece Rita !!
11 Years Ago
Indeed! Thanks, Renee!
You know it, Rita. Mother Nature laughs at us and does as she chooses. Lydi**
Posted 11 Years Ago
You know it, Rita. Mother Nature laughs at us and does as she chooses. Lydi**
11 Years Ago
Keeps us humble! Thanks, Lydi!
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