Reminder to Control Freaks

Reminder to Control Freaks

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
"

Senryu

"

Control freaks beware

Mother Nature’s wild mood swings

will not bow to you

© 2014 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
If you're still not convinced, come to the East Coast... as soon as the airports are cleared...

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That she will not... all bows before her feet! Great write, Rita. But, can I at least complain about the snow a little? Lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! Complaints about the snow and cold were what lead to this write, Travis... LOL! Go ahead, compla.. read more
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

11 Years Ago

I know... and I hate being ignored (says the control freak)! Haha
She humbles those who are arrogant and reminds those that God gave it power and laws to govern with its domain......Excellent...:)........

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Amen, beautifully expressed Sami! Thank you!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...Any time...:)....................
It's so true, I've often wondered why we don't respect the power of nature more than we do. This is succinctly insightful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Because we are given the illusion of control in every other area... Thanks, Blue.
icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

So true and I know we dream of controlling the weather too.
This can be use for some commercial, enjoyed it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, A, glad you enjoyed!
A. Amos

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, you have good taste in Authors:)
Well I am glad im not one of those.My son is young and thinks he can control the world Hence he is shoveling driveways today

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

A good lesson for him to learn... send him my way with that shovel, please! :)
Tate Morgan

11 Years Ago

He is a good kid and he and i use to shovel the drive of the old woman down the road
Yes that is true . We have a lot of micro manager in our workplace . Who wants to be the chief and not indians . Oh perhaps you have this rare one ... The Jezebel Spirit . ... The work place could turn into dessert full of cactus .

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! Thanks, Neil!
Ahaha, this is true. Mother Nature is truly uncontrollable.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

She puts us in our place, for sure... :)
For a second I thought this one was about me but then I saw the Author's notes. LOL. Very clever, Rita.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Lol! ;) Thanks, Pryde!
She does know how to keep us humble… great piece Rita !!


Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Indeed! Thanks, Renee!
You know it, Rita. Mother Nature laughs at us and does as she chooses. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Keeps us humble! Thanks, Lydi!

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