Noah's Complaint

Another Limerick

That Noah, he sure made his mark

though he wanted to just disembark

he called to the Lord,

“I deserve great reward ~

have you seen the floor of this ark?”

Author's Note

:)

Reviews

[Blue]

Why didn't they put this in the Bible? They skipped this part and just proceeded to the rainbow thing... ;)

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Yes, the rainbow was a much nicer image that the reality of that Ark, I'm sure! Thanks, Blue!

[icelandicblue]

The devil is always in the details! ; )

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Indeed... shouldn't have been so meticulous with those cubits, and concentrated on more practical matters. :) Thanks for reading, Blue!

[paul sal.....]

probably didn't smell to well either, clever and funny.....

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thank you, pS.

[paul sal.....]

my name is paul, savior of the human race

[s y e]

Ewwie, Rita... Girl, TMI! Hahaha, loved this though, made me laugh

[Rita L. Sev]

Always the goal! Thanks, Noodle!

[Brittany Zedalis]

I knew when I saw the title of this that I was going to enjoy it. Haha.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Glad you did, Brittany! Limericks are a way that I clear the cobwebs in my brain... :) Thanks!

[Frieda P]

Eww the imagery...haha. Thanks for the chuckle this morning Rita. ;-)

[Rita L. Sev]

:) A morning chuckle is a good start - glad you enjoyed; Thanks, Frieda!

[Angel]

I'm sure they had moments when they were sooooo glad God had them put a window in the thing...

[Rita L. Sev]

Lol! A task of biblical proportions, indeed!

[Baby Ricochet]

Now That's a funny poem............

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Mark!

[Pryde Foltz]

Funny stuff, Rita. Poor Noah.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Pryde!

[Marie]

That's funny. Poor Noah couldn't prepare for everything...

[Rita L. Sev]

Well, he had so little time... :) Thanks, Marie!