Noah's Complaint

Another Limerick

That Noah, he sure made his mark

though he wanted to just disembark

he called to the Lord,

“I deserve great reward ~

have you seen the floor of this ark?”

Author's Note

:)

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaa very funny Rita.I'm guessing that he wished he had invented the shovel first lol

[Rita L. Sev]

Or a jumbo litter box... LOL! thanks, Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[m.s.early]

Hilarious... Great jest...

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Just having some fun - Thanks, Xavier!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Yeah I'd hate to be the janitor on that boat… another good one

[Rita L. Sev]

He'd deserve a pay raise... Thanks Dale!

[Einstein Noodle]

love your humor Rita ...

E.

[Rita L. Sev]

Life is funny, E - I've got plenty of material. Thanks!

[Jack...]

Hmmm..I guess Noah forgot to pack a bucket and mop? Cute Rita.

[Rita L. Sev]

He had quite a job, that's for sure! Thanks, Jack!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as bill cosby said in his Noah skit...

"who's going to clean up that mess, not me i'll tell ya"

and when the lord said..."you have two male hippos, got to get rid of one and bring another one in"

noah said ' i ain't bringing nothin' in, you change one of 'em"

a fun piece Rita....

[Rita L. Sev]

That is one of my favorite bits of all time - Cosby (a Philly guy, of course) was awesome on the "Himself" album! (What's a cubit? Lol!) Thanks, Jacob!

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, I adore limericks though I am so dang bad at writing them..........this is great! It certainly made me chuckle!! - And that is always a good thing!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Sheila! Limericks are a lot of fun to write - so glad this one was fun to read, too!

[Cassie]

This is a good Tuesday morning poem, made me smile

[Rita L. Sev]

Glad to give a smile! Thanks, Cassie!

[Lyn Anderson]

This is so cute. I love stopping by your page.

[Rita L. Sev]

Glad you enjoyed! Thanks, KL!

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Lol truly funny piece, Rita. Great work!

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thanks, Travis!