Poetry Senryu

Poetry reaches

touching funny bone and heart

then it finds the soul

Author's Note

Happy Poetry Month!

captcha: outwrite LOL!

Reviews

[C. Rose]

Outwrite - nice captcha. I once got 'herohood'.

I like that I can both visualize this and that it makes sense with how poetry works.

Also, appreciate the large font size.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, C. Rose. Myopia means always using big fonts...

[PiaHelenMaria]

This is so cool! I love how you capture the most truthful pieces of wisdom in the shortest texts. Love, Pia

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Pia! :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

A perfect description of the essence of poetry. ^-^

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Brittany! I haven't forgotten you - I have some of your pieces in my RRs - hoping to carve out some time to give it justice soon!

[Brittany Zedalis]

I totally understand haha. I have over 200 right now.

[Aethereal]

This was is so true. I was inspired by your poem to write this funny soulful gift poem for you:

Soulful Shoes

Shoes who travel far
over roads of stone and tar
set their soles ajar.

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thank you for your clever review, Aethereal!

[Troy Henson]

How true is this!

Many different forms touch us in many different ways.

Yours Rita always make me smile:)

Regards
Troy

[Rita L. Sev]

As do your reviews! Thanks, Troy!

[icelandicblue]

Poetry like yours certainly does Rita. This is quite lovely.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Blue :)

[LawrenceRaybon]

Absolutely Amazing! Can't offer any constructive criticism, or criticism at all for that matter... Bravo!

Cheers,
Lawrence
Constructive Critics Group

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks so much, Lawrence! :)

[Marie]

Very good. THat's what peotry should do.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Marie.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

with senryus like this...definitely Happy Poetry month...

jacob

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Jacob.

[A. Amos]

So true, my friend... grest senryu

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, A.