Memorial

A folded flag and empty boots

attest he’s paid the price,

his name forever etched in stone

recalls his sacrifice

 

and now our greatest tribute

to pay homage to his fall;

ensuring that there’s justice

and liberty for all

 

Author's Note

A barbecue and time with family is great, but providing freedom for all every day is the gift of a soldier. The least we can do is to maintain it, and pass it on.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

And that's what it's all about Rita!! We do have fun with family and friends, but the true message of this holiday is what you have written!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Sheila!

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮This makes my heart ache. In only 8 lines, you've reminded us all of sacrifice. Write on!╰☆╮

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Luna...

[Deuces]

Our freedom should always be celebrated and never taken for. An awesome tribute. Your writing always packs a powerful punch in a few lines.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, G. Truly appreciate your words.

[Michael G. Smith]

Wonderful piece. I feel like you are a poetess tease. Every time you write I leave wanting more.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Thanks, Mike - I generally stop when I feel the message has been delivered, afraid to clutter the issues...

[Michael G. Smith]

Uh, I always feel like your just getting started when it comes to the end. I know I'd like to put more time into some of my poems but time is so scarce.

[icelandicblue]

I couldn't agree more and your poem sings to the purpose of the day. It is a contemplative day for those who have lost someone so that we might all enjoy the state of freedom. Well done.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Blue. :)

[Renée]

Amen Rita ! Beautiful tribute for this day !

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Renee!

[Renée]

♥
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[Sami Khalil]

Memorable words and gift for this Memorial day to honor the sacrifice for those who gave with their lives rights and significance. Thank you for the honor and sharing too in the spirit...Excellent...:)......................

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................

[redflutterby]

Youve touched the real meaning in your words...I love that you always remind us of the true spirit behind our holidays. It holds a great significance to me as many of my family have served. My grandmother was also a member of both the American Legion and The VFW Ladies Auxiliary for many years. I bought my poppies yesterday as is our family tradition. It always makes me think of her and my grandfather...both are buried at Quantico.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Red. Service runs in my family as well - my husband was in the Army, and his father served in Korea and is buried in Arlington. Our simple freedoms, so hard won...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Spectacular tribute to those who gave their lives for our country and freedom.

In the words of Billy Ray Cyrus

"All gave some
some gave all,
some stood through
for the red, white and blue
and some had to fall,
if you ever think of me
think of all your liberties
and recall, some gave all."

[Rita L. Sev]

Love that song... Thanks, Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure hon.

[Baby Ricochet]

A wonderful Memorial day tribute Rita. Thank you

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Mark... sincerely.