On Light

One small candle flame

illuminates the whole room

consuming itself

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Smart Intelligence Good old sweet poetry.

[Rita L. Sev]

Sometimes its best to keep it simple... Thanks!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Three lines shows how great a poem can be.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Alfred

[Sharon Kim]

Rita, you said so much with so few words. So true and accurate! :(

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Sharon!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

All it takes is one flame to get your inspiration burning.

[Rita L. Sev]

Indeed! Thanks, Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome.

[Marie]

Willweb isn't wrong. I didn't even have to read the poem; just the title and the lighted candle told me it was about Robin Williams.

[Rita L. Sev]

You are right, Marie - a talent gone, way too soon... Thanks for reading.

[willweb]

Some people are like this too. This was great Rita, I could be wrong but kind of makes me think of Robin Williams. I am saving this poem to my favorites, it says so much in so few words.

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes, I was thinking of Robin Williams when I wrote this, Will. He seemed to give his all to make others smile... Thank you.