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A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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Trudging through the food court
ill-bred, sullen zombies
so many walking billboards 
for Fitch and Abercrombie
we've raised a generation
of texting, tweeting drones
their means of human contact
inanimate iPhones
perhaps some day they might just learn
to make a real connection
not settling for modern day's
bland pseudo-affection

© 2014 Rita L. Sev


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Is that a little sassified snark I detect in your pen Ms Rita? ;) Love the moxy here, I'm imagining that's what the previous generation said about us though!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! You make a good point, Frieda - we were quite the TV generation... Thanks for the reminder, and.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh wow, I'm blown away, the pupil teaching the wise teacher. :)
One can only hope Rita… I remember one day on break at work, I was reading a book and looked up to find all the other 9 people in the room with me were playing on there phones and not having a conversation in person.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

That is just sad... and these are adults (I am guessing). There's nothing like the human touch...
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

A few young but yes also a few adults… and you are right so very sad.
In a word, amen...I love it when someone calls out this generation for its 'zombification,' and leave it to a teacher to do it haha...a rather cynical departure from your usual tone, but it's more than welcome, especially in this case...well done Rita :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

A few colleagues and I were discussing the decline in verbal ability and social skills, and chalked .. read more
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

I have no doubt about that my friend...always a pleasure :)

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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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