Melting - Senryu

The words suspended

frozen in an icy block

today a heat wave

 

Author's Note

I think there is a thaw coming...

Reviews

[Kay]

I love this haiku and I can certainly relate to this right now; I've had a terrible block for the past few weeks, but I believe a wave of inspiration is about to hit me! Haha :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, R.M. I am still blocked, with a little verse trickling out from time to time... but I keep hoping! :)

[Marie]

And the words come tumbling out, like a lovely waterfall...

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Marie!

[ANTO]

What a wonderful metaphor about a wonderful new dawn. Happy Days Rita.
Thanks for sharing it with us. :))

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Anto!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if you have had writers block, it is definitely thawing....the words are flowing like a defrosting brook.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Jacob - yes, a LONG dry spell - today - the first day of "summer vacation" - some words came. Ahhh... :)

[Michael G.]

Most excellent work! A very good senryu.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Michael!

[Michael G.]

You are most welcome!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The heat of love will melt the coldest of hearts.

[Rita L. Sev]

That it will... ;) Thanks, Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Welcome sweet Rita