I love you too....

Though in love,

I always said NO...

Was it my fear,

I really don't know...

You wanted to be with me,

and I didn't wanted to lose you,

But despite of this feeling,

I always said NO...

You waited,

and were ready to wait...

This convinced me 

to be your mate..

You always stood by me,

and made me believe in you...

and today...

I just wanna say this...

I know you love me and

I love you too...

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

Oh dear, i'm sorry to be late this time, I didn't really view recently your writings...
I was quite busy creating mine...
But I am here to say - I enjoyed it a lot as I could feel each sense of your each sentence...
well done, very true and very emotional too...
Just a suggestion - 'loose' should be replaced with 'lose' and 'dint' should be replaced with 'didn't'.
As your close friend, i did not hesitate to correct the mistakes..
Apart from mistakes, i loved your poem, one of the best poems of yours...
keep it up, try checking out my recent ones...(i know you do) thanks..
Anindita..

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks alot dear friend... I really appreciate you for correcting my mistakes... And Thanks for reading my poems and enjoying them.. :)

[Cherret Leakey]

'sometimes I run
sometimes I hide
but all I really want is to hold you and treat you right."

your poem reminds me this song. well, I don't remember the exact song but I remember these lines

[Riti Rajput]

thanks a lot for viewing my poem :)

[Norman T]

A gentle confession of love, but your poem has one omission - did you EVER say "YES" ??

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks for your review....
I said YES, when I said "I love you too..." :)

[sarik]

lovable poem...

you keep the poem simple and sweet..really liked...

[Riti Rajput]

Thanks dear, for your valuable review..