Wish on a Rose

Another late night write. ^^

Misty clouds

Dewdrop beads

Glassy moon

Single rose

 

Glistening petals

Prickly stem

In full bloom

A deep maroon

 

Ivory skin

Rush of red

Imbedded deep

The silver thorn

 

Glowing bright

Shining white

The magic within

Flowing tonight

Reviews

[Windsong]

This is a very detailed description of the bittersweetness of the rose. Nice imagery. =)

[Lovely Mistake]

wow...that is really powerful! i mean the silver thorn!!! would be like the knife! oh my god...its great!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Beautiful, just beautiful. Awesome job!!!

Heather

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Oh, this one is beautiful, so many colours and beauty described.
I love this poem!!
It is a favorite..

Peace

Chloe

[Anata]

Poems written at night mostly turn out to be one of the better or even best. Putting the worries from the day aside your mind is free to express, free to evolve.
I like this poem, it's different, a good kind of different.
A rose seems very simple, yet you managed to capture the unique, the unseen by many.
Very good work.