Smoke

Giving in,

So now I shall begin,

Pain sweet pain,

How it helps my brain,

Am I insane,

This wrecked my soul,

Might as well smoke another bowel,

If only for a short time,

I can hear the bells chime,

Who wants to run for a dime

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Am I insane,
This wrecked my soul,
Might as well smoke another bowel,
If only for a short time,
I can hear the bells chime,"
You writes are go deeper than the obvious with hidden meanings ...Brilliant...:)

[Rob Funk]

You are the man my friend lol

[Sami Khalil]

The feelings are mutual...You are welcome...:)

[Will Neill]

Rob, your still writing-thats good. I enjoyed this one.
Regards.
Will