Day Dream

Mind drifts across oceans and waves,

The mind carries thought through mountains and time, sights of a sunset, can be seen,

by the eye of a mind, in a daydream.

Reviews

[Iris Jayne]

Job well done. It is short, but the image it created in my head is immense. Felt like flying.

[Robyn]

wow, this is such a beautiful short piece. i absolutely love it

[KL]

Was the overuse of commas intentional? Either way, the briefness of this poem itself summed up a daydream... short, and beautiful.

[china]

This is very nice. I wish the journey was a little longer. Thanks for the ride.

[Aven]

a meditational journey perhaps :)

[Chantel]

Wonderful imagery--it sounded kind of wistful in my head, dreamy actually, which I'm sure was what you were going for. :) The shortness is tantalizing but adds to the wistful effect....great write. :)

[MissVixen]

I wish it was a little bit longer :'( The imagery you use is great though and really paints a clear picture

[Andrew Wright]

Beautiful. Simply Beautiful.

[Ruth]

All the beauty of nature observed internally, inside the minds eye we can see all if we wish!
Beautifully voiced!
xx

[Marie Harrison]

Lovely self expression.