Flying High

Soaring with the stars.
Right outside this plane window tonight.
So close, I could just reach out and grab one.
Pull in one special star.
A star to light up my world.
I’m embraced in a dome of light.
Each star more dazzling then the next.
But it’s you I choose to be my one and only.
My only one.
All I want is you.

 

Baby, you’re my star.

 

            Yet, the  d i s t a n c e  keeps us  a p a r t.

Reviews

[Emily B]

oh, this is nice . . . wonderful!!!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a vivid cinematic canvas where feeling is given its breath~ beautiful poem with correlation between the celestial and human love well connected~

[StacyPerry]

I enjoyed this one as there is a distance that parts me from a loved one.

[Fran Marie]

A great piece of poetry penned with sweet emotions~

Nicely DonE!!

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"Each star more dazzling then the next.
But it’s you I choose to be my one and only.
My only one.
All I want is you.
Baby, you’re my star.
Yet, the d i s t a n c e keeps us a p a r t."

{sheez--i know the emotive mood of this poem...
...all too well----a magnificent piece of writing}

james:-)

[Clockwork]

Ah yes the star-crossed lovers. I think the twist of the distance at the end is interesting. It makes one wonder why the distance is there and what could keep such a love apart.

[Marshall Hanson]

I liked this poem a lot. Great work!!!

[Matthew Kult]

Pretty and heart felt. I hope the one this is meant for enjoyed it as much as I did.