then came you

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YOU.

 

captivating.
charming.
enticing.
radiant.
patient.
humble.
beautiful.

 

You changed my world to be everything you are.

 

Reviews

[luciddreamer]

This one has me thinking

[AK]

You are too kind... oh, wait... I see. My mistake. Nevermind.
Interesting piece! Good job.

[Crowley]

Very cool....needed a table in word to write this one. The structure really lent to the feel and the impact, and the colored font did as well. I think I got your point....maybe one more read through just to make sure.

[Martina]

interesting

[J.S. Pua]

good experimental piece..
all other words seemed to have highlighted the last line..
good work..

[.]

"You changed my world to be everything you are."

{love the experimental format--a unique awesome poem}

"captivating.
charming.
enticing.
radiant.
patient.
humble.
beautiful."

...love it...

james:-)