You

YOU….

I had a dream last night I met you again…..

Deciding against the pain

Sifting through the pleasure

Arriving to the present

I had a vision I spoke to you again

Casting away the memories

Sailing through the mistakes

Arriving to the Past

I had a though today I forgot you

Moving Past the Past

Throwing away the Present

 

Approaching the Future

Reviews

[Bear]

Interesting poem, it shows creativity and deep thought. I do wish you would have given me more though, things like who you dreamed of? What was the nature of your pain and pleasure? If you leave to much to the readers imagination it is to easy for misinterpretation.

[spitballing]

'I had a though today I forgot you'

I think there is some kind of typo in here. I can't really tell what this line means.

The rest though is pretty good. It has a rather constructive format to it and flows well.

[FancyMee]

Very Nice and str8 to the point. Beautiful read.