Miasma

Trapped
In this subterranean hell
Surrounded by a bevy of Darth Vaders
Please send help

Reviews

[Angi]

All that heavy breathing. Anyone have a mint? Angi~

[Rogue]

Hahahahaha

No kidding, Angi!
-makes note to stock the bunker with those-
:D

[Cool Handless Luke]

More than one Darth Vader?!?!? Count me out - I did my part with the original and look what it got me! This was humorous. Were you spelunking with some heavy breathers perhaps?

[Rogue]

Luke I am your father??? Talk about confusing. -grin-
I wrote this when I was in a rather sarcastic yet humored mood, by some folks at a party. My mind conjured up some post apocalyptic underground bunker (from which there was no safe way to leave) and the people inside it annoyingly insisting on wearing gas masks. How's that for a "metaphor" on my feelings at that moment? :D
Thank you, Jeff. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Darth Vaders of starwars or the Dark Father.
Sounds to me that you are surrounded by evil people or feelings and you are seeking help to get out of depression.
I hope you find peace and serenity.
Another great write...:)

[Rogue]

Thank you. :)
I always enjoy reading what what you see and take from my words. Your perspective at times a better read than my piece. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. Good to know. You are welcome...:)

[Monster ^.^]

Sorry, but I laughed after "Darth Vaders" :))
Very Good! haha!

[Rogue]

Good. I did also. Glad you picked up on the humor of it. :)

[Monster ^.^]

It's hard to miss that ;)