Inhabitant

Thoughts..

Beneath the limbs of the great oak
Sky alight with a thousand stars
Soft kiss of farewell for each dream
Watching as they make their way into the world
You will find me here if you only look
Nestled safely amongst the deep roots

As always, I will be waiting..

Reviews

[Cool Handless Luke]

I like this. Uncomplicated and yet deep and beautiful. Eternal.

[Rogue]

Thank you. This one is one of my favorites.
And of course, it might explain my attraction to the verge outside your den. :P

[Cool Handless Luke]

Ha! Nice!

[Rogue]

-grin-

Well you are a good sport and I enjoy that.

[Cool Handless Luke]

despite what you would learn of me in my writing. i find humor in most every where. better to laugh than to cry!

[Rogue]

I picked that up as well.. Hence why I had no fear of teasing you. :)
It really wouldn't be impossible for me to be in your bushes, Jeff as I am only half a days drive from you (if that). -grin-

[Cool Handless Luke]

she said in that tone you use where you convince the dog to come to you even though you are telling him you are gonna beat him for chewing on that couch!

[Rogue]

Hahahahaha

I would never mistreat an animal. On that you have my word. :)

[Samuel Dickens]

Something richly primordial about this. I can't say I completely understand, but I like it.

[Rogue]

Primordial.. I like it. :) where the roots began..
Thank you, Sam. :)

[Sam Gregory]

Short but reads smoothly, I like the wording throughout too :)

[Rogue]

Thank you, Sam. :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

feeling of being wanted in the caress of an old Apple tree

[Rogue]

Isn't there an old song "In the shade of the old apple tree.." Or something like that.
Thanks for reading. :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes...i extemporized on that one...welcome

[wynn]

"Beneath the limbs of the great oak
Sky alight with a thousand stars"

Paints a beautiful picture. It reminds me of children on the day that they depart from home...each has his own dream to chase, and after they depart, we wait in the quiet...

Wonderful, thanks for sharing!

[Rogue]

Thank you for reading and your thoughts here as well. :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Beautiful imagery. Excellent read and write.

[Rogue]

Thank you. Very kind of you to say. :)

[Sami Khalil]

I read it to leigh , my co worker , and she said it is a pretty poem . She loves your work...:)

[Rogue]

Leigh is a dear and obviously she has great taste too. -beams-
Tell her many thank you's. She is always kind and gracious in her viewpoints of me. I appreciate this. :)

[Sami Khalil]

She says hello and you are welcome...:)

[Rogue]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

She said you are sweet ...:)
Leigh Jordan

[Rogue]

I have my moments
-eyebrow wiggle-
Again, thank you. Sami is lucky to have someone he enjoys working with. :)

[Sami Khalil]

True and true. Have a great one...:)

[Rogue]

:P

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Sami Khalil]

A lovely poem on waiting for your beloved or fate with great imagery.
I love the imagery of the stars above the tree.
Be careful ; some people need firewood for the winter. They might cut down the tree...Lol just to the last part...:)

[Rogue]

Pfft. Many a lumberjack has tried before.
Thank you, Sami for the lovely review. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome...:)