A clever twist at the end and a poem well penned. For this books were at times banned. A fear of infection but with medicine we have learned that the best way to prevent an infection is to inoculate. It is only by exposure that a disease can be defeated. Isolation from the virus can lead to disaster look what it did to Native Americans with the European invasion. Very nicely written
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1 Month Ago
Soren, thank you. This was a silly little write I wrote when I was young. Still a teen, but only pos.. read moreSoren, thank you. This was a silly little write I wrote when I was young. Still a teen, but only posted around 2015. Reading it again, it gives me flash backs of covid, when I had to get that shot and the needle was huge omg.. I was trying not to faint. haha
A clever twist at the end and a poem well penned. For this books were at times banned. A fear of infection but with medicine we have learned that the best way to prevent an infection is to inoculate. It is only by exposure that a disease can be defeated. Isolation from the virus can lead to disaster look what it did to Native Americans with the European invasion. Very nicely written
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Month Ago
Soren, thank you. This was a silly little write I wrote when I was young. Still a teen, but only pos.. read moreSoren, thank you. This was a silly little write I wrote when I was young. Still a teen, but only posted around 2015. Reading it again, it gives me flash backs of covid, when I had to get that shot and the needle was huge omg.. I was trying not to faint. haha
'With Her Words She infects The masses' ....
'For how can She Infect The already Infected Mind.' ...
I Loved the above lines, hair raising stuff :) Great work!
You can tell that you put in a lot of thought. It's clean and not sloppy. You have a really nice, unique style!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
thank you. I wish I put more thoughts in to it haha my thoughts, like an inky pen just leaked on my .. read morethank you. I wish I put more thoughts in to it haha my thoughts, like an inky pen just leaked on my paper, creating this giant blot lol I am glad you found it clean:) thanks for your review.
cough cough oh w8 i was already sick i like it its catchy
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Hahahaa Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. We're all infected here in the cafe and that's a good thin.. read moreHahahaa Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. We're all infected here in the cafe and that's a good thing.
I write poetry inspired by
the surreal landscapes of dreams
capturing fleeting, vibrant moments
that linger in emotion and vision.
I explore the quiet reflections
of my soul’s journey thr.. more..