I awoke on a vast amethyst sea soaking in the golden sunset over waves of brilliant violet the weight of the world lifting with the rays of the sun painting the skies in dazzling hues I gathered it, in a conch shell
I held in my hands for tomorrows when the seas get too rough then I watched as the sun dipped down behind the horizon in wistful, swirls of distant sunsets as the currents carried me away to a little island surrounded by pink shimmering sands where I swayed in a hammock under the shade of a coconut tree paper and pen and a notebook of dreams sipping in the sweet cool waters of its seed and bathing in the ambient glow of amethyst
In the Isle
of my dreams
This is beautiful, Roma. You published this in 2015… wow. I would have been 13 then--I don’t think I was even allowed on the internet by myself, haha.
Reading it now feels like stepping into a lucid memory I didn’t know I had. Your imagery is breathtaking: a vast amethyst sea, pink shimmering sands, and the quiet magic of a hammock under a coconut tree. There’s a gentle spirituality here, like the dream itself is a sanctuary you can carry with you.
I remember your more recent Amethyst Sea poem, and you mentioned it was inspired by a recurring dream. I see now how vividly and tenderly you hold these moments. It lingers like a sunrise painted across the soul, and I’m so grateful it’s still here for me to experience.
-James
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2 Months Ago
James, your words are so lovely..they make the poem feel new again. Yes, this was an older write fro.. read moreJames, your words are so lovely..they make the poem feel new again. Yes, this was an older write from 2015, and it’s wonderful to hear that it still resonates with you now. I’m glad the dreamscape..the amethyst seas, the pink sands, the quiet hammock..came through in a way that felt tender and carrying. Your reflections make me see the poem afresh, like stepping back into a memory I hadn’t noticed myself. Thank you for reading so deeply and so kindly..it means more than I can say.
..Roma
This is beautiful, Roma. You published this in 2015… wow. I would have been 13 then--I don’t think I was even allowed on the internet by myself, haha.
Reading it now feels like stepping into a lucid memory I didn’t know I had. Your imagery is breathtaking: a vast amethyst sea, pink shimmering sands, and the quiet magic of a hammock under a coconut tree. There’s a gentle spirituality here, like the dream itself is a sanctuary you can carry with you.
I remember your more recent Amethyst Sea poem, and you mentioned it was inspired by a recurring dream. I see now how vividly and tenderly you hold these moments. It lingers like a sunrise painted across the soul, and I’m so grateful it’s still here for me to experience.
-James
Posted 2 Months Ago
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2 Months Ago
James, your words are so lovely..they make the poem feel new again. Yes, this was an older write fro.. read moreJames, your words are so lovely..they make the poem feel new again. Yes, this was an older write from 2015, and it’s wonderful to hear that it still resonates with you now. I’m glad the dreamscape..the amethyst seas, the pink sands, the quiet hammock..came through in a way that felt tender and carrying. Your reflections make me see the poem afresh, like stepping back into a memory I hadn’t noticed myself. Thank you for reading so deeply and so kindly..it means more than I can say.
..Roma
Roma,
I wonder if anyone has ever studied the brainwaves of someone on a pristine beach as turquoise waves wash over their feet... If they could do that, then teach us how to use biofeedback so we could get there at will, all wars might end...
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2 Months Ago
Thank you, Vol. This is an older poem of mine, inspired by a recurring dream I’ve had of this Amet.. read moreThank you, Vol. This is an older poem of mine, inspired by a recurring dream I’ve had of this Amethyst Sea. I’ve written other pieces about this vision as well, and I’ve shared it with my sisters and friends..it’s wonderful to hear that it brings them moments of inner peace, and they even meditate on the imagery of the poem. I’m glad to know it resonates beyond the page; it truly is a place of calm and serenity for me, and I’m happy it can offer a glimpse of that to others as well.
..Roma
Beautiful well chosen words Roma - amethyst is a lovely colour, and you do it full justice here. Exceptional ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️
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2 Months Ago
Thank you so much for reading this. It'san old write. . I’m glad the amethyst came through the wa.. read moreThank you so much for reading this. It'san old write. . I’m glad the amethyst came through the way I imagined it...it’s a color that always feels both calm and infinite to me, and I wanted the poem to carry that. Your kind words mean a lot.
that's where I want to vacation....I loved this to drink a cocktail of the suns rays from a conch shell while lying on pink sands sound awesome! great writing!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
It is bliss. Thank you for your thoughts Terry Smith...:)
This reads like my sister and I's talks when watching all of the beauty God provides in the rising and setting sun. Only He can master those kind of views. Valentine
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10 Years Ago
Amen, well said, Valentine.
aw...I miss my sister now, I haven't seen her in nearly 20 years.. read moreAmen, well said, Valentine.
aw...I miss my sister now, I haven't seen her in nearly 20 years.
Thank you for your thoughts
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