Giving you my heart...

This is for everyone who has ever fallen in love...

You are the first thing I think of each morning when I rise..
The last thing that comes to my mind before I close my eyes...

You are in every though I have and every breath I take..
And my feelings are only getting stronger with each promise we make...

I will prove that I really love you but that is the hardest part..
So for now I am giving you all I can..

I am giving you my heart.

Author's Note

Please do leave a review if you liked it :)

xxxx
Romalina

Reviews

[Deepak Belbase]

A very romantic thought! i appreciate your efforts and your beautiful feelings to make a well crafted piece of art... thanks to share with us

[Mister T.]

I wonder if this poem caused my heart to pulse faster..
Anyway, the flow is really good, I could almost use it as song lyrics in my head.
One little detail you might have overlooked:
'You are in every though I have and every breath I take..': I think you meant 'thought' instead of 'though'.
Well done!

[Prantik Ali]

This is just sooo good.
I would like to come up with poems like these instantly to recite to my crush haha :) :) :)
Well done!

[Gaurav]

It is hard to define love in words but you effectively managed to pull right string of thoughts. Thanks for sharing :)

[Cheesypoetry]

I love it , i can how you feel in each stanza

[AutumnsWords]

Very very nice. My interpretation is that it's coming from someone who has had heartache in the past but hasn't shut the door on love and is taking it one day at a time while still protecting her heart.

[Antoñyo]

Pretty much describes the ultimate elusive heaven on earth
...but that's just my opinion.

Thanks for the beautiful share

[jesserose99]

I really enjoyed the flow, and it had a simplicity to it...the words seemed to come directly from your heart,, an honesty that was apparent. Beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and hopeful words for love.
"You are in every though I have and every breath I take..
And my feelings are only getting stronger with each promise we make..."
The above lines are true. Love is growing closer and finding new places to celebrate love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Romalina]

Thank you for taking out the time to review this :) I really appreciate this.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.