Invisible

                                      Invisible

                                      Sometimes,

                       When you cry,

                       none sees your face.

                      

                     Sometimes,

                                  When you're worried,

                     None sees your smile.

                   

                                    But laugh just one time,

                   And everybody sees you!

Reviews

[Perry]

that's a beautiful uplifting piece mann, I"m really glad I read this, thanks for sharing!

[Brianna Brie]

Every body loves a smile. Pain not so much... Nice reminder to smile more.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

This is delightfully prophetic in its simplicity! What a wonderful write. Thank you so much for sharing. Keep up the great work!
Light,
Siddartha

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

that's great! reminds me of me. if i go to a club, and i'm not smiling, NO ONE comes up to me. ha ha. they think i'm being stuck up or something. no one wants to be aroudn people who cry or are depresssdd, that is why they notice you when you are smiling. nice poem, made me think. that's a good thing.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is so true...people seem to hide their pain...and even though sometimes we show it...it seems to be invisible...Great Job

[kate _wolves]

ya its so true !!our pains are always invisible !!nic work !!

[Jinx's Heart]

I can really relate to this and it's so true. Sometimes it is difficult when it's like this. Very well written, simple poem.