Never Ending Love

That kiss,

                 That touch,

One smile,

                  One love,

Joined together forever. 

                                        Your smile for me

            My heart for you.

My love,

              My heart,

  My life,

             My every breath,

Yours for life.

                      One world,

       One time,

                        One chance,

One moment,

                       One never ending love.

Author's Note

The structure didn't really go to plan the way I wanted it. Any grammar issues or places for change let me know. Thank you :)

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

Very sweet poem!

[Starry Eyed]

Good structure, flowed throughout, and a joy to read!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Really nice, i think it has a nice flow to it with the structure; each small line really good and nicely said, simple indeed... and really nice, i really like it, especially the ending five lines.

[Tania's Novels]

I love this poem(: It's very simple,but very meaningful.

[Jupiter Jazz]

That's like The Notebook kind of love. Tres romantiq

[VelvetRosetta]

Love, I wish it was never ending...maybe some have that luck.

[Kiri Nells]

Interestingly simple write! It has nice flow and patter as well! Well penned :)