Hate becomes love

Love is one thing,

Hate is another.

Desire and lust,

Mixed with fire. 

Can you read the signs?

See the hate become love?

Can you see this magical thing,

Where hate becomes love?

Reviews

[taylorrose]

this reminds me of my sister and her ex boyfriend his love became hate and i feel like this poem touches levels noone else can thanks for sharing this powerful poem with me.

[Daniel88Batson]

Ohhhhh how I wish you used this for the start of a play or short script.
It's lovely, but you have the ability to take this further. =D

[Kiri Nells]

Yay! Happy message! Beautifully done, my friend.

[Thea]

Oh yes, I see...Haha! Sweet poem...

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

It all is very interesting how it works, that's for sure... nice write, and can be very thought thinking too, and have a lot of thought inside this write. Nice.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Hate can become love...much better than the opposite, a terrific read, you are very talented :)

[stars are far]

Nice poem ..