Here I am

When life takes you threw a journey you look back, but only to reflect of just how far you've come and you can say I remember when I wanted to get to where I am today, now I can finally say here I am

  Here I am

  waiting on this moment to come, don't even know where to start.

I, can't seem to let you go. Here I go, dreaming again. believing that

the stars will turn to gold and now, here I am...

even dreamers have times when they fall. 

And then pick themselves back up again.

Here I am

Like a falling star, there I go with my heart in overdrive.

Not knowing if our worlds would collide, but here I am and here I will

stand till we both understand the meaning of why were here.

Here we are, standing as one. look at just 

how far we've come. When we look back one day and say look at where I was 

and who I have become, I can say I have finally gotten where

I want to be. 

Here I am.

Author's Note

I don't know how great this is but wanted to share :) It was something kind of on the spot and spur of the moment, but has a message in it. I hope for you all that it's a positive one! Thank you for reading!! xo "You may not understand the journey, or how you got there. Just know you worked hard to get to where you are, Here you are!"

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Great poem, it is written something like exactly as it should be, where it could fit in several places. For example it could be about a girl planning on breaking with her boyfriend and when she finally works it to get there, there she is at that moment that she had planned to be.

[Rosaria_V]

Wow thanks so much!!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

We all seem to be looking for that feeling. I guess that's why this poem resonates
so powerfully inside. You make us feel that we can all do great things.
Thank you for this reminder.

[Rosaria_V]

You are amazing, and thank YOU

[jo t]

Hi Rosaria, really enjoyed reading this. I feel like I was taken on a beautiful journey with this poem and it was very pure and honest. Really enjoyed this.

[Rosaria_V]

Aww thank you so much!!!

[annabellee]

Gorgeous write, really inspiring. I can totally relate to that, especially the first stanza.
Loved it :)

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you so much!

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Sometimes those "spur of the moment" pieces are the hardest hitting emotionally. This feels raw and real, which in my opinion is a wonderful thing. Sure, a poem can be technically perfect, but often times those pieces lack the purity of emotion that something like this exudes. I quite enjoyed this piece...you showed yourself here.

[Rosaria_V]

that means so much, thank you!!!! :D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"here i am" and "there you were"

now, "here we are"---the journey is always memorable when reflecting on how two hearts met and became one in a galaxy of stars looking for love.
niecly done.

[Rosaria_V]

Awww thank you so much :)

[shallimarRose]

"Like a falling star, there I go with my heart in overdrive.

Not knowing if our worlds would collide" Loved this line.. I will come back and review more later.. hugs, Rose

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you and no rush! :)

[Antoñyo]

Interesting perspective on a familiar journey, and to incorporate the dimension of love being part of it...your journey. Rosie, you're all heart. ;-)

I enjoyed this, of course! Thanks for sharing

[Rosaria_V]

Always so sweet! Thank you Antonyo

[Glen Yumang Manese]

SEEMS LIKE AN EXPRESSION OF THOUGHTS...THE PERSON IN THE LINES IS TELLING THEM TO THE WIND...A VOICE IS PRESENT AS THE THEME: "HERE I AM" IS PLAYED OUT DURING THE ENTIRE READ...THE READER IS THE AUDIENCE IN THE DISTANCE...HEARING THIS ALOUD AS THE WORDS UNFOLD...

I WONDER IF YOU WANTED TO SAY THIS IN THE FIRST LINE:

Here I am
waiting on a moments to come, don't even know where to start.
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OR

Here I am
waiting on moments to come, don't even know where to start.

JUST NOTICED THAT FIRST LINE WAS NEEDING ATTENTION...WITH EDITING...GOOD TO READ YOU...

[Rosaria_V]

Thanks for the review, fixed the first line. I hope it's a little better

[Glen Yumang Manese]

YOU'RE WELCOME...YES...I REREAD AND THE FLOW AND FEEL IS THERE NOW...GOOD DAY...